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Postby Robbie G » Mar 28th, '08, 01:22

I'm so cool i diss myself, and still double my own wealth
just So illmatic and my words shock like static
while I spit disses at you like a semi automatic
Taking shots at me is like shootin ya own feet
not too mention at the same time your girls suckin my meat
if you can't take the heat shut up and take a seat, bitch you ain't from the street
ima soilder like yayo, and a playboy like banks, yet I get no thanks,
even though i'm on top like tom hanks
P.I.M.P like the big 5 0 just to let you know i'd never hit a kid like yayo
this rap shits to easy it's all a joke, just sell a little coke
and get shot at now and then, next just pick up a pen and tell a story, get a little glory
only thing left is to put on a good beat and watch the money pour in like hail and sleet

(Chorus) :whistle:

I can't stop now, I haven't been killed
not my time though, I still got so much to build
but when I go out ima go out shootin, hollerin and hootin
why concentrate on death when I live
can you forgive me for what i didn't give, back
cuz kids starve while I drive a cadillac
but hell you only live once
mine as well get some hoes and smoke up some blunts
i've given my soul to this ink
but as I write my heart starts to sink
fallin down this dark road
that I was never showed
I have too much, time to lighten my load
fuck all you who doubt me,
this game woudn't be the same without me,
nobody needs to help me, I help me, I feed me,
i'm an emcee, simple as that just a,b,c
God you ain't got to forgive me just don't forget me (R.I.P Proof :zipped: )
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Re: Hmmm...

Postby Emadyville » Mar 28th, '08, 01:40

Decent. Liked the ending, nice shout out to Proof RIP
Menzo wrote:Its cuz you're dope and Daddy Dubs. No one fucks with that


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Re: Hmmm...

Postby Rain Matrix » Mar 28th, '08, 15:01

not much to say yur showing improvement
keep writing like it's what u like to do
I'm out :y:
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Re: Hmmm...

Postby Robbie G » Mar 28th, '08, 20:16

Thanks man. At the moment it's not really a serious thing for me I just enjoy it. :y:
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Re: Hmmm...

Postby Xplode » Mar 29th, '08, 05:39

nice i like the ending
God you ain't got to forgive me just don't forget me
So Long Bitch U Did Me So Wrong
I Dont Want To Go On
Living In This World Without
You...........
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Re: Hmmm...

Postby Robbie G » Mar 29th, '08, 22:42

Thanks for the comments.

Pshh...don't make fun of yayo.... he'll kill you....

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