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Closer 2 Tha Edge

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Closer 2 Tha Edge

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 9th, '08, 02:09

I ran to u once and then Fell Down
thanks a lot it feels like Hell Now

these flames eat at My Dreams
do they hear me when I Scream

nothing is what tha Lies Mean
I clear things up like Visine

can u picture a Time Of Peace
I write these Lines Ta Speak

to tha people I more than Kinda Need
cuz I only spit to Find Tha Streets

I think a majority of Minds Agree
unification is happening Finally

everyday there's another obstacle Ta Hurdle
they've literally made tha pain Commercial

stretched to thin there's a Threat In Tha Plan
I'll see death before I have my Retina Scanned

I won't take tha chip I see thru Their Charm
u can call that tha real right to Bare Arms

if they trigger my triggers my Action'll Slide Free
u know who rain matrix is without a National I.D.

tha real enemies are tha ones that have Forsaken Freedom
our soldiers fight to defend it their Wars Playing Treason

united we stand divided we'll definitly take Tha Fall
counterit communists are trying to assassinate Us All

Lincoln took a step towards equality and he Got Dropped
Martin Luther King took it further and another Shot Popped

jfk exposed them damn I wonder who Killed Him
they might let u live if yur among tha Willing

to accept their dictation and be Controlled
I'm staying idependant and ready to Unload

tha factual evidence to support Tha Cause
there is no absolute power for u only A God

his word told of yur plans that's True News
u'll never be jesus so watch what U Do

u secretly take care of tha Devils Work
u might wanna aknowledge tha Ghetto First

don't ignore them they'll let tha Metal Burst
tha north and tha south u can bet Rebels Lurk

we don't have to be Blasting These Weapons
unless u keep insisting on Packing Deception

yur handing out rebates cuz yur a Waste Of Pay
American tradition is something u can't Take Away

humans turn into puppets when their Power Hungry
don't forget about tha people cuz this is Our Country
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Re: Closer 2 Tha Edge

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 9th, '08, 19:31

God Damn!
that was serious man,the flow was the best part about that,it had a meanigfull plot 2 man,
pretty good,but i must say it does feel wierd reading a simpler writing structure from you,i kinda got used to the complex 1's!! :D
this was wiked
peace
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Closer 2 Tha Edge

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 9th, '08, 23:41

Let everyone know to stop drinkin tap water and spring water infact purify lake water cause everything else contains flouride which makes us complacent so all that ish you just spoke of matrix won't be fought against cause we are all to complacent! Seriously look it up yo!
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Re: Closer 2 Tha Edge

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 10th, '08, 00:17

should I record this
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Re: Closer 2 Tha Edge

Postby Xplode » Apr 10th, '08, 17:32

woaahhh :D coooool drop rain matrix yep u shud go for recording :D :y: :flower:
So Long Bitch U Did Me So Wrong
I Dont Want To Go On
Living In This World Without
You...........
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Re: Closer 2 Tha Edge

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 11th, '08, 00:29

Yea for sure record it but don't do it high and freakin add the part about flouride
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