STEVE SPAG - Love Fades (MUST READ)

[Steve Spag]

Well I was on my way home from the studio today when I heard a song on the radio about love, lol. In the song it said "No matter what I'll always love you" and I started thinkin' back to the times I've said that to all my ex's, lol. In reality, love fades, hence the title. I wrote this peice to a beat called "Memories Of You" by Shadowville Productions on soundclick if you'd like to check it out. This is some deep shit, so let me know what you think please.

Everybody loves somebody, but love fades//
When you are fuckin' betrayed, and so you're runnin' away//
You could love 'em today, but then tomorrow it's hate//
Because that ton of the weight that's on your shoulder's will break//
Everything will collapse, you're throwin' photo's to waste//
They ain't important no more so you ignore the erased//
You're movin' along, but forever embrace//
All the golden moments down memory lane//
They're stuck in there frozen and they can't be replaced//
By anybody but them and goddamn it's a shame//
My feelings are changing yet somehow they're the same//
I don't know what you are thinkin', but I'm guessing it's strange//
And if my brain was a shirt you'd be the biggest of stains//
That has been stickin' around and I am sickened again//
Nothing is permanant, so I wish for the day//
That I won't miss you or say you were the biggest mistake//

*"Again" in the 14th bar is pronounced with the accent to rhyme.

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

Leave feedback please

[Steve Spag]

great real shit...reminds me of common

It's call Love Fades, but the song really proved that it doesn't

i would write more, but I'm having a killer migraine and trying to decide if I should just wait it out, or call 911

great job, I love that in all the songs I heard from you, none of them are gangsta, you are the white common (yea I've been listening to common alot )

Haha thanks a lot man. I like Common's shit so that's a pretty big compliment. I appreciate you always checkin' out my shit aswell, glad that you're a fan .

[Steve Spag]

just don't go racist like he does in some songs

So does Steve Spag have anything album in the works?

If you did a tape or album before, you should up it, I would like to hear it

Well actually I'm working on my first full album right now. It's called "Life Overdose". I made a small little EP last year titled "This Is Me", it had like 9 tracks, but they're all on my soundclick website. The link is in my signature, but yeah, I'll upload that sometime tomorrow.

[Big Proof 4ever]

i have song over that beat too

[Steve Spag]

i have song over that beat too

Haha, good shit man. What'd you think of this?

Keep the feed coming please

[Big Proof 4ever]

nice rhyme,deep wud like to hear it

[Arabian Shady]

that was pretty tite man,
as MC sed,this was flawless,
well crefted,sick
peace

[Steve Spag]

Nice and deep. Simple and straight forward flow, perfect structure, easy to understand with a bit of complexity.

Love it, one of the best and most well written pieces here on TR

Thanks a lot brotha. I appreciate it.

that was pretty tite man,
as MC sed,this was flawless,
well crefted,sick
peace

Thanks much dude.

[SajN]

Really nice man , It's deep and very good.

For me, you've been a bit better. Don't misunderstand me, you are very very good, you've just been better than that

You got this perfect structure as always

Keep it up

PS: Check out my newest verse.

[Steve Spag]

Really nice man , It's deep and very good.

For me, you've been a bit better. Don't misunderstand me, you are very very good, you've just been better than that

You got this perfect structure as always

Keep it up

PS: Check out my newest verse.

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it for real, as always.

[Rain Matrix]

this was emotionally deep... some people fear love and replace it with hate and fear
there will never be peace like that... keep writing man

music like this does not go unnoticed

[Steve Spag]

this was emotionally deep... some people fear love and replace it with hate and fear
there will never be peace like that... keep writing man

music like this does not go unnoticed

Thanks man. Touchy subject for me, but I'm happy the way it turned out, lol.

this song makes me sad cuz it reminds me of "somebody"
good job tho man, been listenin to your music a lot .. especially like your unfaithful remix .. wonder what rihanna would say if she heard it
do you still plan to release your "alive and healthy ep"? read about it on your myspace .. but you seem to work on an album which is even better
keep it up

Well thanks man, glad to know you're a fan, I appreciate that. I'm not really sure what to do with the Alive and Healthy EP right now though, a lot of the material is older now and not as good. I DO have my "Life Overdose" LP coming soon, and I've been thinkin' about keeping Alive and Healthy for a following EP sometime after I drop my album. Of course it'd be with all new songs, lol.

Again, thanks for the feed everyone.

[MesAyah]

All the golden moments down memory lane//
They're stuck in there frozen and they can't be replaced//
By anybody but them and goddamn it's a shame//
My feelings are changing yet somehow they're the same//


this one stuck out as the strongest part of your verse, i could def flow to this, i think you got a lot to work on on your rhymeschemes though, its a bit to easy. can be boring

keep up

Peace

[Marsh devileny]

Your writing ant bad Steve if anything I see talent in you though playing thought your song's on soundclick id say your biggest flaw is your recording (I ant a hater) don't get me wrong there was a lot of it i liked but most of the time when you rap it sound's like your reading off a page, I had the same problem when i stated out you just need more recording time, but nice work any way’s dude

[Steve Spag]

Your writing ant bad Steve if anything I see talent in you though playing thought your song's on soundclick id say your biggest flaw is your recording (I ant a hater) don't get me wrong there was a lot of it i liked but most of the time when you rap it sound's like your reading off a page, I had the same problem when i stated out you just need more recording time, but nice work any way’s dude

Thanks man, I appreciate the honesty, and yeah I know that's my biggest problem. However I've finally been getting some recording time more often now, so I'm deffinetly working on my delievery/emotions I put into the song. But thanks for checkin' out the tracks and thanks for the feed