Marsh - Wine Reneged Savour

[Marsh devileny]

Gone wit the wind

[Marsh devileny]

Hope not lol thank's for the feedback dude yall can't find more of my old track's in the link below

[Marsh devileny]

Really appreciate that dude I'm from the north of Ireland we don't tend to have the normal Irish accent lol glad to here your working on the beat it's a real great beat with a lot of room for flow will you be posting in the audio section? just wish Sinima made more beat's like it

[Marsh devileny]

Aww well all got's to start some where lol you have a bandpage? or any music on soundclick?

[Marsh devileny]

lol wow you really are starting out not to bad you have the concept down just need a little mic work

[Marsh devileny]

Like i said mic work i started out with a 2 bit mic and no idea how to even write a rhyme though i write every day now and as far as the above work goes i wrote that a little while back it's not ment to be excessively complex cuz it's a Diss though don't get me wrong i ant on that beef shit ive go a saying about that "if you want beef go to the butchers motherfucka" lol

[Steve Spag]

It's a pretty good peice, but I have to agree with Chet and say some of it was a little too Eminemish for me. But some parts were actually pretty cleverly written. Keep it up

[Marsh devileny]

A lot of people say that about all of my music I think it may be the cartoonish aspect I bring to my writing though i feel it help's a lot for imagery for example when I say "Sound's like dearth Vader got he vocal’s in a not" I really mean it, when the guy rap's he sound's dearth Vader but i know what you mean and because so many people feel that way ive been working on writing with less cartoonish input and more realness though thanks’ for the feed dude

[Marsh devileny]

Aww I see what you mean now thank's for the head's up guy's never even relised thank's again

[Rain Matrix]

A lot of people say that about all of my music I think it may be the cartoonish aspect I bring to my writing though i feel it help's a lot for imagery for example when I say "Sound's like dearth Vader got he vocal’s in a not" I really mean it, when the guy rap's he sound's dearth Vader but i know what you mean and because so many people feel that way ive been working on writing with less cartoonish input and more realness though thanks’ for the feed dude

^^

oh yeah is yur mic a Light Saber that will Slice Paper like a Iced Vapor diced by a White Laser
if u Act Yur It I'm Accurate Hazordous
like letting a Dagger Twist thru Shattered Ribs
just to make a Bastard Spit


deja vu playboy- I think u could do better

[Marsh devileny]

"Playboy" what the hell are you talking about? if you get any more child-Ish I’m going to have to sing you nursery rhyme’s to keep up with you kindergarten flow... I know i can do better it's an old peace unlike your new wack drop's if your gone post on my thread make it disspencefull and not out of anger k playboy

[Marsh devileny]

What’s that supposed to mean?