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Postby shadyallday » Apr 17th, '08, 14:29

(verse1)
yo, i'm well-known in the streets/they all know i'm a beast/ that gets u pissed, standing there, holding ur heat/ u act hard,but i know ur all sweet/ thats just what i need, more beef/ i guess more cats is gonna die, before i leave/ they'll be 5 wounded, 7 injured, and 4 mores gonna bleed/ i got cats that'll kill u for no reaon/ they'll go to ur door and just start squeezin/ now ur whole family is greivin b/ look on the bright side, you'll get half off ur flight with a bereavement fee/ that'll teach u to second guess how dangerous Weazy be/ u already know that i'm hot man /now u know, my crew always gets it poppin/ my mans like dopnt buck that dude/ why the fuck not, what the fuck he gonna do?/

(chorus)
man, fuck ur crew/ u dont know what i'm gonna do/ fuck it, i'll hawk spit at ur crew/ i'll spark clips at ur crew/ i will start shit wit ur crew/ u got no heart bitch, so fuck u!/

verse 2
i really dont give a fuck about who u go get/ cause u wont do shit to me or the cats i roll wit/ damn, these cats is so bitch/ i'm like Neyo, so sick/ i'll pull out the desert eagle so quick, u wont even notice that it wasn't loaded/ that apartment building u just ran in is full of explosives, but u wont even know it, till the place goes up/ in flames, but that wasnt my motive/ u started the shit now ur at the bottom of the ocean/ swimmin with the fishes, now i'm waitin for an opening/ maybe i'll hide out in Hoboken/ hopin nobody finds the gun i was totin/ hopin they dont get a statement from the cat in the hospital havin convulsions/ hopefully that other cat wont get out of the coma, i'll probably be traced back to that explosion/ ur crew knows how violent i am/ its like some shit from silence of the lambs/ fuck with me and u'll hear silence...then BLAM!/

verse3
man, ur crew aint gon do shit/ and if u think about doin shit, i will get ur crew hit/ u'll be in a box like toothpicks/ u dont think i'm gonna do it?/ i'ma keep poppin off till i let off 2 clips/ till ur dome is soft like nugat/ ur better off just movin/ when my mans and them caught u snoozin/ ur like "please dont shoot kid"/ i'm supposed to be so soft right?/ then why am i the one who split ur wig with an exhaust pipe?/ these cats always wanna talk, fight/ until i get they whore sniped/ too bad u didn't have the foresight, not to step to me, u woulda been all right/ its only a matter of time, till i'm labeled the best rapper alive/ why u so mad at my shine/ u saying i'll never make it, but bitch i'm happy to grind/ i'ma put out mixtapes, whatever it takes, u wanna battle then fine/ dog, u aint gangsta just cause u carry a .9/ whats this world comin to?/ cats got beef with people more successful man fuck ur crew/ i guess it sucks for u/
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Re: f*** ur crew

Postby Marsh devileny » Apr 17th, '08, 14:48

I agree with chet I mean the image count's for a lot and even some of the bigger cat's making money writing like that don't even do it... try write more about you and be a little more real
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Re: f*** ur crew

Postby Emadyville » Apr 17th, '08, 17:51

Yeah I agree with Chet except for it could be written by a major artist, cause even if an artist you heard of wrote that, there's no way they'd be major. Change it up and get a little more complex and then send it.
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Re: f*** ur crew

Postby Emadyville » Apr 17th, '08, 20:25

Ha ya know what, I'll agree with that except for Get Rich, 50 is pretty simple and repetitive. But remember, he is with Em, so got to take that into consideration.
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Re: f*** ur crew

Postby JMG » Apr 18th, '08, 04:17

u suck
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Re: f*** ur crew

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 18th, '08, 07:21

This really needs to be lined up better then it is type it in line format isntead of para case its harder to read that way for example.



Renegade Lyrics
Artist(Band):Eminem Review The Song (9) Print the Lyrics



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[Jay-Z]
Motherfuckers -
say that I'm foolish I only talk about jewels (bling bling)
Do you fools listen to music or do you just skim through it?
See I'm influenced by the ghetto you ruined
That same dude you gave nothin, I made somethin doin
what I do through and through and
I give you the news - with a twist it's just his ghetto point-of-view
The renegade; you been afraid
I penetrate pop culture, bring 'em a lot closer to the block where they
pop toasters and they live with their moms got drop roasters from botched robberies niggas crouched over
mommies knocked up cause she wasn't wached over knocked down by some clown when child support knocked
no he's not around tnow how that sound to ya, jot it down
I bring it through the ghetto without ridin 'round
hidin down duckin strays from frustrated youths stuck in they ways
Just read a magazine that fucked up my day
How you rate music that thugs with nothin relate to it i help them see their way through it - not you cant step in my pants cant walk in my shoes bet everything you worth you lose your tie and your shirt

Since I'm in a position to talk to these kids and they listen
I ain't no politician but I'll kick it with 'em a minute
Cause see they call me a menace; and if the shoe fits I'll wear it
But if it don't, then y'all'll swallow the truth grin and bear it
Now who's these king of these rude ludicrous lucrative lyrics
Who could inherit the title, put the youth in hysterics
Usin his music to steer it, sharin his views and his merits
But there's a huge interference - they're sayin you shouldn't hear it
Maybe it's hatred I spew, maybe it's food for the spirit
Maybe it's beautiful music I made for you to just cherish
But I'm debated disputed hated and viewed in America
as a motherfuckin drug addict - like you didn't experiment?
Now now, that's when you start to stare at who's in the mirror

See how its easier to read?
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Re: f*** ur crew

Postby Marsh devileny » Apr 18th, '08, 09:29

I agree, though you have to take into account that we all know that song and where Jay z stand's he don't even write his lyric’s down so really there is no layout for his, someone just wrote that up on the net but your rite a better layout make's it easer not only for us to read but for you when your on the mic doing it and it also help's to improve your flow cuz as you know a lot of cat's round here sound like there reading there rhyme's off paper that the reason cuz of the way it's wrote i know cause i used to do the same… if your looking a better layout look up some of the better written rap's and there layout and try to base your's wit the same formula i bet you anything you will find it work's great and it's also easer to remember your line's
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Re: f*** ur crew

Postby Xplode » Apr 18th, '08, 09:34

djblue is right :) but that was whosh gangsta shyt man :y:
So Long Bitch U Did Me So Wrong
I Dont Want To Go On
Living In This World Without
You...........
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