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Just my thought on this stupid ass contest!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 18th, '08, 00:09

my thoughts on the Creative Writing Contest

I got superior skill, eerie words fill...the room with, feel me...more feelings
Than any one is dealing, with...killing the gift cats stealing the print
I'm billing for this! fuck copyright, extortionist, pealin your wigs...if
You don't pay up you better stay up cause I'm on my way up...and if
you aint awake trust, I'll bust, a spray of, flesh ripping off your make up
Ya'll is fakers drags fag rapers, ass ate what, I'm losin it but wait, what?
I come back with the who FUCK you think runs this shit from behind the scenes
I'm behind you always I hear your screams it's not helping I hear you yelling
Your failing to connect with yourself your failing to respect yourself
Your failing to accept yourself so SHUT THE FUCK UP when I say GO let yourself
You can't even successfully express yourselves I suspect your dwelt dealt by the devil himself
And you know what else I secretly have the most felt speech with my mental outlets
Talk about lyrical prowess I'll have you all powerless in less than an hour shh...

re-read the shit if you have to
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Re: Just my thought on this stupid ass contest!

Postby Emadyville » Apr 18th, '08, 00:18

Nice shit :y: def different flow, loved the ending and the "wait what?" part
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Re: Just my thought on this stupid ass contest!

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 18th, '08, 10:48

the topic was HIP HOPS LYRICAL PROWESS
not urs
its deffinately way off topic,so try writing sumthing on that
peace
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Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Just my thought on this stupid ass contest!

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 18th, '08, 15:43

tha contest is what it is... why are we still debatin it

son write from tha heart if u can... I'm not saying this wan't good
but yur obviously distracted
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Re: Just my thought on this stupid ass contest!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 18th, '08, 22:51

Arab just tshut the fuck up and rain your good so I aint gonna say much but dude don't tell me how to write it's always from someone heart shallow or deep I just be discrete oh and Arab shut the fuck up you suck dude, yea I said it twice cause sometimes dumbshits like you need to hear it more than once. Peace and Arab shut the fuck up!'

P.S. Arab if it was Hip Hops lyrical prowess how come every one wrote about themselves btw just shut the fuck up!
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Re: Just my thought on this stupid ass contest!

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 22nd, '08, 18:08

see not only do u suck,ur ignorant as well,
all i tried to tell u was there are marks for "topic relevance" but apparantly u cant handle that,
repeatin "stfu" so many times?? come on man cut that gay shit out,it shows u still a kid
:whistle:
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So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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Re: Just my thought on this stupid ass contest!

Postby Purple23Haze » Apr 23rd, '08, 01:32

and your stupid stfu
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Re: Just my thought on this stupid ass contest!

Postby Robbie G » Apr 23rd, '08, 02:26

Purple23Haze wrote:and your stupid stfu


Not sure what your pissed about but learn to take criticism.
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