Verse

[Robbie G]

Flipping the bird, fuck whatever you've heard
Im the best all the rest of you are just absurd
Don't compare me, i'm on my own level
I'm scary, cuz I scoop hoes like a DustDevil
Flip it, rip it play my track don't skip it
I'm in your head, heart and ears admit it
I don't smile, cuz I don't see any good
I wouldn't explain, even If I could
but back to the happy shit i'm on top
On fire every drop, the new king of hip-hop
I learned from before me Shady and Jay-z
hit singles followed by a hard song is the key
Don't dumb it down, but don't be so smart
it ain't a school lesson, it's from the heart

Also do guys think this would be a decent start for a second verse?

Get Rich or die trying, sit home at night crying
trying to be positive, but inside I'm slowly dying
If I don't make it now it's over I can't lose
get in my way I snatch ya hat and take your shoes
This shits just off the top of my head
that being said I'm still ahead of K-fed
theres another wack ass emcee
part ya in half like the dead sea set ya free
If biggie and pac could once again walk
they'd look at the game and be in shock
might be grim, but soon to be classic times
Rakim will be played a thousand times
one last word before I leave and go
Obama is a fuckin homo!

I know the formats messed and it's not polished but is that worth working on? i'm not too keen on it myself..but idk..

[Robbie G]

Nice verse man, I liked it

Need to get yourself a mic, and get to working

Yeah I know...Thanks for the comment.

[Rain Matrix]

I'd say this is definitly recordable...
look over yur verse it's good keep doing yur thing...

try to get that mic

[Robbie G]

Does it have to be a mic? Or would a nice headset do?

Because i'm thinking of getting one for voice chatting over some games.

[Arabian Shady]

that was pretty good man,defo a huge improvment frm before
sick shit shadie
peace

[Robbie G]

Thanks.

[-[Zach]-]

pretty damn good. i especially liked the 1st one. very good job