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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby -[Zach]- » Apr 21st, '08, 05:13

just thought i'd stop by and drop some lines of mine
its time that i take my life of crime and put it into rhymes
mutiple guns with mutiple clips
enough ammo to kill a school full of kids
maybe i crossed the line with that but oh well
it just shows i got the balls to go there
i've taken all that i can in this world
i got a glass of the swirl and my hand on your girl
no joke no lie no playin
i go broke u die from a slayin
prayin ain't gon help you one bit
life is a bitch but fuck it
"Did you ever stop to think/I'm old enough to go to war but I ain't old enough to drink" - 2Pac

"It's time to let the truth be told/There ain't no brighter day/'Cause when it all unfolds/A n**** gon' just pass away/These haters tryna stop my grind/But I bet them hoes can't block my shine/So tired of takin' losses not this time/I can't save the whole world I'm just tryna look out for mine" - Z-Ro

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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby shadyallday » Apr 21st, '08, 15:31

i got introduced to the game and fuckin blew up/ u got abused in the game waiting for ur 15 minutes to be used up/ theres no denyin that u suck/ everybodys afraid i'll say something alarming/ piss off the wrong person by saying the wrong thing/ i dont rap for the paper/ i spit the raps that'll make ya/ say he's the shit, damn i cant be a hater/ u only wanna rap for the paper/ u go to the clubs like "can i rap?' uh...no i'll get back to ya later/ i'm not a bad person/ i just get mad when u say i'm erratic, sporatic and i tend to act nervous/ its just that i love to rap i have a knack for it/ these critics put everything i spit under a microscope/ they just mad that everything i spit on the mic is dope/ but they always try to misquote/ and if i contemplate suicide they wont think twice to find me a rope/ in the back of my mind man i hope/ that the fans dont turn on me and start saying "damn i dont like what i wrote"/ i rap circles around my opposition/ on wax i murder all my competition/ i cant relax i want everybody on the block to listen/ to my shit, my shit is hot i want to be in the top position/ i dont want to be at the bottom without a pot to piss in/ how do u expect to get connects in the business? when u cant get any record execs to listen/ or any A & R's to pay attention to any wack rhymes ur spittin/ i dont gotta sell my shit out the trunk of a car/ u wanna say shit? u see this pump, get the fuck out the car/ when it comes to my raps i try to raise it, not go under the bar/ i went multi plat ur shit went nothin so far/
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Arabian Shady » Apr 23rd, '08, 18:16

Chet wrote:
shadyallday wrote:i got introduced to the game and fuckin blew up/ u got abused in the game waiting for ur 15 minutes to be used up/ theres no denyin that u suck/ everybodys afraid i'll say something alarming/ piss off the wrong person by saying the wrong thing/ i dont rap for the paper/ i spit the raps that'll make ya/ say he's the shit, damn i cant be a hater/ u only wanna rap for the paper/ u go to the clubs like "can i rap?' uh...no i'll get back to ya later/ i'm not a bad person/ i just get mad when u say i'm erratic, sporatic and i tend to act nervous/ its just that i love to rap i have a knack for it/ these critics put everything i spit under a microscope/ they just mad that everything i spit on the mic is dope/ but they always try to misquote/ and if i contemplate suicide they wont think twice to find me a rope/ in the back of my mind man i hope/ that the fans dont turn on me and start saying "damn i dont like what i wrote"/ i rap circles around my opposition/ on wax i murder all my competition/ i cant relax i want everybody on the block to listen/ to my shit, my shit is hot i want to be in the top position/ i dont want to be at the bottom without a pot to piss in/ how do u expect to get connects in the business? when u cant get any record execs to listen/ or any A & R's to pay attention to any wack rhymes ur spittin/ i dont gotta sell my shit out the trunk of a car/ u wanna say shit? u see this pump, get the fuck out the car/ when it comes to my raps i try to raise it, not go under the bar/ i went multi plat ur shit went nothin so far/


go eminem



damn that had exactly the same flow as "Big Weenie".
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We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Tornado » Apr 23rd, '08, 20:15

the blizzard is spitting
with the wizard words which are written
in ancient scriptures is it hidden
it's the return of the rhythm
spit with total precision
my words painting a vision
to what no-one could envison
coz, i'm so sick, it's forbidden

just a few there :shifty: :smoking: looks pleased
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby Rain Matrix » Apr 23rd, '08, 21:31

I keep my Rhymes Tight and Lines Nice
battling me is a bad idea in Hind Sight
it's a Blind Fight without ya Mind Right
mc's I have um all cut up like Fine Ice
I'll document it and send it to Time Life
Psychopathic lyrical Rifles Blast Quick
I Might Go Back With a Knife So Thats It

...UNH!
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Re: Just rhymin...continue the lines if you want...

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Apr 27th, '08, 03:19

shadyallday wrote:everybody's like i remind them of michael myers/ why? cause i wouldn't think twice to slice ur tires/ break into ur house and attack u with a butcher knife and pliers/ i would start a fire, but the fire would ignite a riot/ then i would have to explain to the firefighters, but they wouldn't buy it, especially when my cars blocking the fire hydrant/ i try to drive away, but i start a nine car pile up/ i would stop ur bleedin chin, but it would just bleed again/ i'm so disobedient/ i need a friend, i'm a demon seed, playin with hypodermic needles and pins?/sometimes i wonder fam, could i have been the son of sam?/ probably not, i'd go to shoot and my gun would jam/ and it would suck, cause i couldn't have called a mulligan/ i'ma act like Jack the Ripper/ i'ma backslap ur sister/ if i attack this kid, u'd overreact, and i would have to act fast, and slash ur wrists up/ u would have to be a slasher film buff/ to really know which way i would have to kill her/ maybe i could re-create Freddy and Jason/ u think i'ma malevolent rapist/ i would bring the machette, but its too heavy to wave it/i can't be held accountable for all the dead bodies u find on the pavementand all the dead bodies u found in my basement!/i guess i'm sorta like Norman Bates/ but i'd probably get off on a manslaughter case/ i don't think that much force, made the camcorder break/ i was bombed out of my gourd okay/ i'ma flee the scene in a white ford like O.J./ i don't think the glove will fit/ then u must acquit/ man u know i ain't do nothin kid/ u always blame me when u find something big/ i'll let him go, if he just submit, i have no reason for doing it, just for kicks/ he shoulda never let me in/ now theres a bloody mess, and i get arrested again, go in for questioning, and get sentenced to 10/ years but i have no regrets for what i did/ i'm like Dennis the Menace, in need of medicine, i'ma go relax i just got a seditive/


so let me know what u think man write me back peace...


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Slim Shady, brain dead like Jan Brady
I'm a M80, you Lil' like that Kim lady
I'm buzzin, Dirty Dozen, naughty rotten rhymer
Cursin at you players worse than Marty Schottenheimer
You wacker than the motherfucker you bit your style from
You ain't gonna sell two copies if you press a double album
Admit it, fuck it, while we comin out in the open
I'm doin acid, crack, smack, coke and smokin dope then
My name is Marshall Mathers, I'm an alcoholic (Hi Marshall)
I have a disease and they don't know what to call it
Better hide your wallet cause I'm comin up quick to strip your cash
Bought a ticket to your concert just to come and whip your ass
Bitch, I'm comin out swingin, so fast it'll make your eyes spin
You gettin knocked the fuck out like Mike Tyson
The +Proof+ is in the puddin, just ask the Deshaun Holton
I'll slit your motherfuckin throat worse than Ron Goldman


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