Big Ax-D wrote:yo sii
what u doin man?
you really are imature, how old are you kid?
"you rhymed Bitch with Snitch hahah lmao lmao lmao"... you got a brain problem or sometin?
man you rhymed "retarded" with "accent", really really stupid, and i ain't postin it like idiot
if you so sad, go away... I really don't see the point of you wasting your time on this
all you gonna say is "I know mine was better, and you are all dickriders"... don't waste your time on that man, leave rap, find something else to do bruh...
Nah, tash, it wasnt supposed to rhyme (if it sounded like it did, cool shit lol). buttttttt.. You *ARE* fucking retarded(Axe). Telling ME to leave rap and you cant even spot a transition or inner-multi/rhyme??
Well, i dont expect you to know what inner-multies or transitions are... But i'll break it down for you:
in the rhythm of the beat there are two claps for one bar. A bar is **NOT** 2 lines. 1 bar is based on the amount of claps (Normally....) ... ok, time to really take you to school (im laughing at how little you know for how much you talk..)
An excerpt from my verse:
Dont get me started how ya boyfriends half retarded
That faint hearted faggot, trying hard with his accent
how's he gonna step to sii, I'll end a roach like pestacide
Everything i spit make ya bitch up & rub her thighs
I heard ya verse & sympathized.. something was missing
Dont get me *started* how ya boyfriends half re*tarded* (Also a multi)
That faint *hearted* faggot, trying hard with his accent
^^^ Ok, this is the transition. It's not transitioning on the clap so it probably confused most yall..
The transition from the started/tarded/hearted rhymescheme to the faggot/accent rhymescheme
(Faggot/accent only last half a bar, while tarded/started/hearted last 1.5 bars equaling out to 2 bars total for 2 rhymeschemes)
how's he gonna step to sii, I'll end a roach like pestacide (step to sii / pestacide.... multie. BASIC??? PLEASE SON!)
Everything i spit make ya bitch up & rub her thighs (Spit/bitch are inner-rhymes but arent multies They rhyme on the voul, aswell..NOT THE ENDING..I heard ya verse & sympathized.. something was missing (here "sympathized" is part of the thighs/sii/cide rhymescheme)
it then changes to missing, yadda yadda.. whatever whatever.
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You, on the other-hand, rhyme ONLY (For the most part) on the clap. Which is VERY basic and VERY predictable. See, i argue my points because i KNOW i'm right. I know what to look for and what other people (not your groupies) will look for aswell. my rhymeschemes are 10x more complex than yours (Note: I'm not saying im the best, in no way shape or form) but your rhymeschemes are on some DR. Seuss shit...
Say what you will, I've already shown yall i dont give a shit what you think.. but this is true fact. Insteada hating, read this and learn something. Oh, and whoever posted above me saying i'm mad?? lol, come off it son.. I could teach most of you fucks how to write proper.