NEW STEVE SPAG - 519

[Steve Spag]

Just wrote this earlier today at the studio. It's got a really unique flow to it. Again, I don't have the beat to show you guys, but hopefully you can still get the right flow (there are a lot of short little pauses through-out it). I kinda think the ending is a little too Eminemish in my opinion, but I still like the way it turned out. Enjoy, and leave some feedback.

519, it's live, so get with me//
It's time, to drink mickies, to dry, this whole city//
My pipe, is soo sticky, from dimes, it's soo trippy//
My mind, is soo tricky, this dyke is soo pretty//
I like, to bite titties, the size, of ripe veggies//
I'm nice, and soo witty, I try, to write steady//
I'm like, a young 50, but white, and not shitty//
I like, to rhyme quickly, and grimey like Biggie//
My high, is like tipsy, alive, and soo picky//
Don't try, and fight with me, I might, just try winning//
This vibe, is like sinning, not bright, and soo tempting//
The hype, is now sending, all guys, to right living//
My pride, has been extending, since time, in the begining//
No lies, when I am spitting, surprise, I'm go-getting//
It's time, to go get 'em, and rise, to momentum//
Soo wise, when I show 'em, they die, from my venom//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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[Solace]

Finally another new piece from you. Sweet. LOL i love this line:

I'm like, a young 50, but white, and not shitty//

Hilarious. I like the flow and the way you put your words. Good job Also, your right, the ending does seem a little bit Eminemish.

[SkinNBlista]

I like... would like to hear it tho....
U got it on a link?

[Steve Spag]

Finally another new piece from you. Sweet. LOL i love this line:

I'm like, a young 50, but white, and not shitty//

Hilarious. I like the flow and the way you put your words. Good job Also, your right, the ending does seem a little bit Eminemish.

Thanks a lot man, I appreciate it. Glad you found it funny, I never really do funny verses all that much, but I like some of the little punchlines I put in it.

I like... would like to hear it tho....
U got it on a link?

Thanks man, and nah, it's not recorded yet. When it is though, I shall upload it on here. Expect LOTS of new tracks to come soon, including "Dedication" on this saturday, my 20th B-Day.

[SkinNBlista]

Great will look out 4 it...
Happy Bday in advance

[Emadyville]

I enjoyed it, if flow is how I was feeling it should be sick

[TheWeirdoIsBack]

Sounds real sick man, the rhymes were great, and that line about Fif made me laugh too haha. The way I read it, it kinda has like a "No Apologies" flow, no? Either way, can't wait to hear more shit from you bro.

Happy birthday in advance

[Steve Spag]

Thanks for the feed everyone, and the early birthday wishes, I really appreciate it.

Sounds real sick man, the rhymes were great, and that line about Fif made me laugh too haha. The way I read it, it kinda has like a "No Apologies" flow, no?

Haha, thanks man, but nah, it's not really like his flow for that song. It's kinda similar, but also very different, lol.

[Steve Spag]

I liked it man, good steve as always

My pipe, is soo sticky, from dimes, it's soo trippy//

my fav line....lets just say, things have changed...I no longer hate something

Hahaha, that's funny man. Just don't go overboard like Mr. Spag here, haha, know your limits. And thanks for the feed, as always, your opinion is appreciated.

[Darkblade44431]

this verse reminded me of eminem on re-up..but ehh...that isn't a good thing. this isn't appealing to me. i think it sounded sort of like "jimmy crack corn" i guess, if i were to compare it to anything. i dont like the flow either. in my opinion, you can do better than this. keep at it man, ur a good rapper.

[Steve Spag]

this verse reminded me of eminem on re-up..but ehh...that isn't a good thing. this isn't appealing to me. i think it sounded sort of like "jimmy crack corn" i guess, if i were to compare it to anything. i dont like the flow either. in my opinion, you can do better than this. keep at it man, ur a good rapper.

Thanks for the honest feed man. Yeah, I know this verse is a little Eminemish, like I said above, but I just thought I'd post it anyways, lol.

[Solace]

Oh yeah and then Happy B-Day in advance! Hows the Life Overdose LP coming along? Is this song gunna be on it?

[Steve Spag]

Oh yeah and then Happy B-Day in advance! Hows the Life Overdose LP coming along? Is this song gunna be on it?

Thanks dude. And the album is coming along very nicely. I got a few tracks for it recorded already, releasing "Dedication" at some-point tomorrow. I still got a couple tracks that arn't quite finished, but I got plenty of time before I gotta start worrying, haha.

[Solace]

Oh yeah and then Happy B-Day in advance! Hows the Life Overdose LP coming along? Is this song gunna be on it?

Thanks dude. And the album is coming along very nicely. I got a few tracks for it recorded already, releasing "Dedication" at some-point tomorrow. I still got a couple tracks that arn't quite finished, but I got plenty of time before I gotta start worrying, haha.

Ah cool Cant wait to hear it

[Steve Spag]

This song is up'd on the audio page for those who wish to check it out, lol.