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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Solace » Jul 8th, '08, 09:48

Chet wrote:good shit man

can't wait to hear it... :smoking:

whos hearing what now? its not being recorded ;) and thanks :happy:
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Solace » Jul 8th, '08, 09:51

Chet wrote:ohh my bad....sorry, i got u confused with every other kid on here who wants to rap lol

lol dont sweat it :sweating:
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Kosovic » Jul 8th, '08, 12:26

I am not entertained.
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Ka0t1c » Jul 8th, '08, 13:28

thanx, im glad u like it, i hope this helps ppl understand more and also produce some creative thoughts for the future of hip hop :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Rain Matrix » Jul 8th, '08, 16:30

rechecked it... it's definitly better now that it's edited
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Solace » Jul 8th, '08, 18:39

Kosovic wrote:I am not entertained.

LOL

@Rain, thanks :happy:
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby gladimnotsoluble » Jul 9th, '08, 04:43

Hey, nice job man, keep continuing with this. I want too see it like 3 verses 16 bars each. I'm liking where it's going
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Xray » Jul 9th, '08, 06:45

lol are you talking about ur self in these lines?

Ayo, stop acting like mister tough guy,
before you fuck around and get locked in cuffs (oh my!),
you're acting a little too cocky for this shit,
get another hobby other than having your wrists slit, (haha)
and how come whenever i see you, ya act like a lyricist,
if you ever battled with me, you'll wish you never existed,


cause you seem to be talking about yourself lol.
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Solace » Jul 9th, '08, 06:53

gladimnotsoluble wrote:Hey, nice job man, keep continuing with this. I want too see it like 3 verses 16 bars each. I'm liking where it's going

thanks, ill try to do that.

@xray...So, im acting like a tough guy, im too cocky, i slit my wrists, whenever i see myself i pretend im a lyricist, and if i battled myself, i will own me. Yes. Yes I am talking about myself, sir. :sweating:

EDIT: Xray howd you get that part if i changed it alraedy?
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby The Toy Soldier » Jul 9th, '08, 16:16

shadymademe wrote:
gladimnotsoluble wrote:Hey, nice job man, keep continuing with this. I want too see it like 3 verses 16 bars each. I'm liking where it's going

thanks, ill try to do that.

@xray...So, im acting like a tough guy, im too cocky, i slit my wrists, whenever i see myself i pretend im a lyricist, and if i battled myself, i will own me. Yes. Yes I am talking about myself, sir. :sweating:

EDIT: Xray howd you get that part if i changed it alraedy?


prolly quoted it while you edited it
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Xray » Jul 9th, '08, 17:26

naa lol quoted it from kaotic :p

and i didn't mean to be rude, but that true lyricist thing is getting kinda old :y:
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 9th, '08, 18:09

This is some dope shit man! Good work! :y: :8)
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Solace » Jul 9th, '08, 20:17

KillahGoat wrote:This is some dope shit man! Good work! :y: :8)

Thanks man!

@Xray, what do you mean by the whole lyricist thing? saying that im good and stuff? yeah i know its overdone but im just trying to get better with lyrics, not subject/content.


edit: i added a couple lines.
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Kosovic » Jul 10th, '08, 01:29

Do you really write that for me? I thought i told you, but i dont review lyrics. Either make a song or stop asking for attention.
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Re: True Lyricist

Postby Solace » Jul 10th, '08, 01:33

What did i write for you now?
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