[ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

[Tornado]

will leave feed downloading

[mart85]

I'll probably repeat things that everybody said but anyways lol, here is what I thought of the tracks:

It's all clear now:
Real solid track to start the EP Sick lyrics and flow, everything was on point to me. Great short track!

Trapped in a plague:
Already left feed

Six six six:
I wasn't really feeling this track that much, it started good, you had some good lines (the Jason line was cool) but then the beat distracted me too much... the counter melodies were out of tune with the rest and it really distracted me drums should have been louder IMO... I couldn't really enjoy it, other people seemed to like it, but it's not my type sorry Syanied Xray, you did good on it tho

Bump:
Great track here. I think it's my favorite of the EP. Everything was nice in it. I really liked the hook too, it sounded nice, but it would have been even better if you had tried to add some lines here and there, like at the end of the 4 bar pattern, just to keep it more interesting... was still nice tho, I enjoyed it

Filthy beast:
Another nice track. Again, everything is sick, I don't have any complaints lol. About the beat, it's a different type of beat from tash so good job on that I would have liked the drums to have a bit more "groove", but it still worked

Trapped in a plague remix:
I think I liked this beat better but it did change the vibe of the track so I understand those who didn't like it as much... I think it was nice, IMO there's no point in remixing a song if it's going to sound exactly like the original lol, so I liked it

Overall it was pretty solid, there wasn't really anything negative about it at all, except maybe, like speech said, the subjects were a bit similar, I would have liked to hear different type of tracks with different vibes, but it still didn't bother me... Keep up the great work, it was a solid effort

[Tash8]

you had some good lines (the Jason line was cool)

hahahahhaha

thx for the feed mart

[Xray]

thanks RG, yeah my voice has got more mature if thats what you meant. and thanks again bro

thank you mart and yeah that line was written by tash along with the first 6-8 bars i think, but i re-edited the lines to flow it on beat team work ya feel me

uppin for more

[Tash8]

thank you mart and yeah that line was written by tash along with the first 6-8 bars i think, but i re-edited the lines to flow it on beat team work ya feel me

for sure man, if people liked it, it doesnt matter right?

[Xray]

thank you mart and yeah that line was written by tash along with the first 6-8 bars i think, but i re-edited the lines to flow it on beat team work ya feel me

for sure man, if people liked it, it doesnt matter right?

yep, brothers in arms

[Xray]

I just now saw this, but it's 4 am.. i'll leave indepth feed soon.

cool man, looking forward to your feedback

[Xray]

bump, uppin for more feedback

[Xray]

After spendin alomost a week listerning ive decied theres not much i can say that hasnt been said......mainly by bars big ass post lol. i think tash has come very far as a producer and i think you (Sajjid) put alot of time into what you do which is what alot of people here fail on. The only bad thing i can say is i feel at times you could be more lyrical. aside from that tho i fully liked and was impressed by what you have done.def 1 of the best things to drop on tr.

thanks alot bro, and yeah i do need to take more time writing verses down, cause atm i dont spend much time writing. so yeah i definitely need to start writing everyday to improve

thanks again man

[Kez]

Been meaning to review this.

It's All Clear Now:
Beat is sick
I fuckin love the flow
Delivery, fierce as ever
Lyrics are a bit simple but very effective
Hook is alright, does it's job well. Wish it wasn't repeated as much near the end, but sick sick track.
4/5

Trapped In A Plague:
Already reviewed this.
Still a sick track, probably one of my favourites from you.
5/5

Six Six Six:
Beat is alright
I am fuckin jealous of your delivery, you're so fierce
Flow is sick as well
Lyrics some great lines, rhyme-wise some good multis on this but the actual lyrics are sick.
Hook i like, except i thought it would of been a good effect that at the end, you could of said "Number six six six six six" 5 times, cause the beat kinda ends like that. That's just a suggestion from me, though.
Concept is typical you, quite unique you don't hear it often.
4/5

Bump:
Beat sick, as usual from VTZ
Again, sick flow
Nice to hear a bit of a less loud delivery from you, still retains the energy
Some sick lyrics and rhymes here
Concept is sick
I actually like the hook
5/5

Filthy Beast:
Beat's nice
Flow once again great
This has my favourite lyrics of the tape, some funny shit in terms of lyrics despite still slightly simple rhymes.
Concept is similiar to Six Six Six, but still good.
4/5

Trapped In A Plague (Remix):
I think i prefer the original, i dunno this beat just seems a bit emptier. The other one created more atmosphere for me.
Still a good remix, mixed well and everything.
But i prefer the original.
I can't really rate this since it's just a remix.

So overall, the tape was sick. Delivery and flow are still some of the best i've heard from TR rappers.
Lyrics are great, but the rhymes at times are a bit simple. It doesn't really detract from your messages; but it's still something i noticed.
Concepts were varied enough, beats were well picked.
Quality was fine obviously due to your new mic.
The length was perfect for an EP, it kept my attention through the tracks.
So really all i can ask you to improve on is your lyrics somewhat and just keep on doing what you're doing.

[Xray]

Been meaning to review this.

It's All Clear Now:
Beat is sick
I fuckin love the flow
Delivery, fierce as ever
Lyrics are a bit simple but very effective
Hook is alright, does it's job well. Wish it wasn't repeated as much near the end, but sick sick track.
4/5

Trapped In A Plague:
Already reviewed this.
Still a sick track, probably one of my favourites from you.
5/5

Six Six Six:
Beat is alright
I am fuckin jealous of your delivery, you're so fierce
Flow is sick as well
Lyrics some great lines, rhyme-wise some good multis on this but the actual lyrics are sick.
Hook i like, except i thought it would of been a good effect that at the end, you could of said "Number six six six six six" 5 times, cause the beat kinda ends like that. That's just a suggestion from me, though.
Concept is typical you, quite unique you don't hear it often.
4/5

Bump:
Beat sick, as usual from VTZ
Again, sick flow
Nice to hear a bit of a less loud delivery from you, still retains the energy
Some sick lyrics and rhymes here
Concept is sick
I actually like the hook
5/5

Filthy Beast:
Beat's nice
Flow once again great
This has my favourite lyrics of the tape, some funny shit in terms of lyrics despite still slightly simple rhymes.
Concept is similiar to Six Six Six, but still good.
4/5

Trapped In A Plague (Remix):
I think i prefer the original, i dunno this beat just seems a bit emptier. The other one created more atmosphere for me.
Still a good remix, mixed well and everything.
But i prefer the original.
I can't really rate this since it's just a remix.

So overall, the tape was sick. Delivery and flow are still some of the best i've heard from TR rappers.
Lyrics are great, but the rhymes at times are a bit simple. It doesn't really detract from your messages; but it's still something i noticed.
Concepts were varied enough, beats were well picked.
Quality was fine obviously due to your new mic.
The length was perfect for an EP, it kept my attention through the tracks.
So really all i can ask you to improve on is your lyrics somewhat and just keep on doing what you're doing.

thanks bro, been looking forward to your feedback so thanks man and yeah i'll definitely work on my lyrics thanks again bro, much appreciated

[B.A.D.]

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[KDEWolf]

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First track is a diss track against you. FYI

Not taking any sides.

[Tash8]

downloading now

First track is a diss track against you. FYI

Not taking any sides.

he knows, they "squashed" it.

[Xray]

downloading now

First track is a diss track against you. FYI

Not taking any sides.

he knows, they "squashed" it.

yep, what happened in the past, happened. let us focus on the future YO!