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NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Steve Spag » Jul 20th, '08, 18:37

Well I promised you folks some new material, and here ya' go. Not too much to this track really, just somethin' to keep me out there while I'm workin' on my LP. I tried out some different flows for this one aswell, so it's really a different track for me, but I'm happy with the way it turned out.

http://www.myspace.com/stevespag

http://www.soundclick.com/stevespag

http://www.zshare.net/audio/1566356494720c57/

Anyways, enjoy and let me know what you think.
ALL feedback is appreciated.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Tash8 » Jul 20th, '08, 18:48

well lupe killed this song

your vocals should be just a bit louder..

your flow is cool on this, great job on that.. ur prounciation was shakey.. but overall cool song..

good job.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Jay-19 » Jul 20th, '08, 18:50

I like this song. Really feeling it man, good job. You have nice flow and nice lyrics. I also really like your delivery on this one, it fits the beat really nice! :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby mcZu » Jul 20th, '08, 19:05

Like Tash8 said, Lupe killed this song.
Your version is nice though :y:
Lyrics were not bad, your flow was ok :y:
overall a nice piece of work :b:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 20th, '08, 19:14

flow was was crazy on this haha
lyrics were good...simple and repetive but good i liked em
didnt like the beat
quality was great
your canadian arent you lol
good track tho
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Steve Spag » Jul 20th, '08, 20:24

Thanks for the feed everyone, it's all greatly appreciated.
And yeah Sticcy, I'm from Windsor, haha.

Keep the feed comin'.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Solace » Jul 20th, '08, 22:29

Cool i gotta check this out later.

edit: i like this man :y: i like the flow of it, the flow was awesome. Yeah like Sticcy i didnt like the beat too much, but it wasnt horrible. I dont hate it nor love it. Overall id say 8/10


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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Steve Spag » Jul 21st, '08, 04:52

shadymademe wrote:Cool i gotta check this out later.

edit: i like this man :y: i like the flow of it, the flow was awesome. Yeah like Sticcy i didnt like the beat too much, but it wasnt horrible. I dont hate it nor love it. Overall id say 8/10


PS. Canada owns. Toronto here :smoking:

Haha, thanks much homie.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Xray » Jul 21st, '08, 05:09

flows cool, flow/delivery is good. tracks decent but aye how come you double voice all your songs? btw beat is nice
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Steve Spag » Jul 21st, '08, 05:14

Xray wrote:flows cool, flow/delivery is good. tracks decent but aye how come you double voice all your songs? btw beat is nice

Thanks much. And the reason I double 'em all is to make it sound more full, lol.
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Xray » Jul 21st, '08, 05:19

Steve Spag wrote:
Xray wrote:flows cool, flow/delivery is good. tracks decent but aye how come you double voice all your songs? btw beat is nice

Thanks much. And the reason I double 'em all is to make it sound more full, lol.

oh ok but it sorta ruins the vibe though. cause you double voice all of them. doubling a few is ok but all of them gets kinda boring. i think if you didnt double up the acapellas on this..would of sounded better :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 21st, '08, 11:07

flow and rhymes are decent man
:y: dont mind the doubling of the vocals...
but yeah....vocals could be a lil lil bit louder :y:
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Epidemik » Jul 21st, '08, 22:49

nice! pretty dope man. that beat is just sick...
flow was good. lyrics were dope.
good as usual man.. nice!
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Tornado » Jul 22nd, '08, 00:15

your version is generally good, flow and lyrics fitted and flowed nice to the track, but a bit of pronoucing strain at the beginning but good song
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Scatter (MUST HEAR)

Postby Steve Spag » Jul 22nd, '08, 20:44

Thanks for the feed guys, it's all still very appreciated. I might be droppin' another full track sometime soon. Probably within a couple of weeks or so. Keep the feed comin' please :).
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