[ALBUM] The Formula For The Weak EP - SaJJad

[Xray]

and it's not a real diss

if you listen close....he whispers..."i wanna" fuck axe d

he was just showing some love

lmao it "was" a mis understanding diss, so just ignore that track if you will YO!

[B.A.D.]

yeah, I hurd that track even before the tape came out

but I'm not takin offence, like he said, what happened in the past, is past

now we focusing in the future

[Xray]

I know it's a day or two late, but I promise i'll get to this today. It seems everytime i remember this (or check TR) it's like 5 am, lol. I'll jot this in notepad though so iremember to leave feed haha.

lol ok cool man.



uppin for more

[Boston]

sorry it took long haha, and right now is one of the only times ill be able to do this, so consider yourself honored im bumping this before summer school at 650 am haha, nah but foreal, heres my feed, sorry it took long

1. flow is nice, lyrics on point, pronounciation is good haha, you seem american to me, thats probaly why. (im american too) shit, fuck t pain, speak your mind lol. nice start

2. not my favorite beat, i think you could of did better at choosing the beat, but i like the concept, and lyrics are on point, and im feeling this vibe and like the way your going with this.

3. once again the beat, nothing special. flow seems like its off a tiny bit at some points (not trying to seem like a dickhead, just trying to help) im really not feeling this track, im not saying its bad but just not appealing to me. lyrics are straight

4. nice start to the song, better beat picking haha, one of my favorites, if not my favorite. goood shit. probaly my favorite song over all, so woo!

5. im feeling the lyrics to this song, beat i like at times, and some times i dont haha, weird yeah i know. but i like where you went with this, so far now number 4 and 5' are my favorites. flow is nice on this to, and your delivery isn't bad.

6. to me you switch up a flow a good amount here, which is nice, and this to me is mixed better than most of em. beats nice. lyrics nice. seems like you got stronger towards the 2nd part of the album haha.

overall this is a nice EP, just goes to show how many people running around in this world that have talent and sometimes might stay like that. good luck bro, good luck on your future songs.

7/10

[Xray]

sorry it took long haha, and right now is one of the only times ill be able to do this, so consider yourself honored im bumping this before summer school at 650 am haha, nah but foreal, heres my feed, sorry it took long

1. flow is nice, lyrics on point, pronounciation is good haha, you seem american to me, thats probaly why. (im american too) shit, fuck t pain, speak your mind lol. nice start

2. not my favorite beat, i think you could of did better at choosing the beat, but i like the concept, and lyrics are on point, and im feeling this vibe and like the way your going with this.

3. once again the beat, nothing special. flow seems like its off a tiny bit at some points (not trying to seem like a dickhead, just trying to help) im really not feeling this track, im not saying its bad but just not appealing to me. lyrics are straight

4. nice start to the song, better beat picking haha, one of my favorites, if not my favorite. goood shit. probaly my favorite song over all, so woo!

5. im feeling the lyrics to this song, beat i like at times, and some times i dont haha, weird yeah i know. but i like where you went with this, so far now number 4 and 5' are my favorites. flow is nice on this to, and your delivery isn't bad.

6. to me you switch up a flow a good amount here, which is nice, and this to me is mixed better than most of em. beats nice. lyrics nice. seems like you got stronger towards the 2nd part of the album haha.

overall this is a nice EP, just goes to show how many people running around in this world that have talent and sometimes might stay like that. good luck bro, good luck on your future songs.

7/10

awesome i agree about second part of the album is stronger, and yep six six six wasnt mixed well i think, or maybe its just the way i recorded it, but yeah thanks man, i agree on everything you said and props bro really appreciate the honesty

[Epidemik]

downloading now.. will leave feed tomorrow after a good listen

EDIT:

got my drink on.. so if it appears im rambling... thats why..

It's All Clear Now: First off beat is pretty sick! Quality is excellent! my fav. part of this song has gotta be the chorus. Nice Grimy feel too it! Flow is right on.. lyrics are good. only thing is that i wish it had 1 or 2 more verses.. 4/5 but would be 5/5 if it had more verses..

Trapped in a Plague: already gave feed on this... so ill just say dope as fuck and leave it at that.. and also that the beat was decent. 5/5

Six Six Six: Nice and hardcore imo. really good track, but not something i'd bump at a party lol. this is the type of song that makes me zone out and kinda think wow.. chorus is sick as usual. beat is alright.. definitly a solid beat for the type of song and i loved the way that you started the second verse for some reason.. just sounded like you had a lot of energy at the time. overall nice track. 4/5

Bump: I think this is my favorite track out of them all. Flow is fucking sick and consistant. Beat is fucking dope!! This song gets me pretty hyped! the second verse is fucking insane, especially the beginning!! this shit i WOULD bump at a party or in my car. 5/5 love this track..

Filthy Beast: beat is pretty dope. reminds me rockey for some reason.. like the type of song you would listen to before a fight... Good song overall 4/5

Trapped in a Plague Remix: I think i actually like this beat better than the other one xcept for maybe the chorus.... it flows a little better (imo). dope as fuck though dude.. wish i could record shit like this.. 5/5

[Xray]

downloading now.. will leave feed tomorrow after a good listen

EDIT:

got my drink on.. so if it appears im rambling... thats why..

It's All Clear Now: First off beat is pretty sick! Quality is excellent! my fav. part of this song has gotta be the chorus. Nice Grimy feel too it! Flow is right on.. lyrics are good. only thing is that i wish it had 1 or 2 more verses.. 4/5 but would be 5/5 if it had more verses..

Trapped in a Plague: already gave feed on this... so ill just say dope as fuck and leave it at that.. and also that the beat was decent. 5/5

Six Six Six: Nice and hardcore imo. really good track, but not something i'd bump at a party lol. this is the type of song that makes me zone out and kinda think wow.. chorus is sick as usual. beat is alright.. definitly a solid beat for the type of song and i loved the way that you started the second verse for some reason.. just sounded like you had a lot of energy at the time. overall nice track. 4/5

Bump: I think this is my favorite track out of them all. Flow is fucking sick and consistant. Beat is fucking dope!! This song gets me pretty hyped! the second verse is fucking insane, especially the beginning!! this shit i WOULD bump at a party or in my car. 5/5 love this track..

Filthy Beast: beat is pretty dope. reminds me rockey for some reason.. like the type of song you would listen to before a fight... Good song overall 4/5

Trapped in a Plague Remix: I think i actually like this beat better than the other one xcept for maybe the chorus.... it flows a little better (imo). dope as fuck though dude.. wish i could record shit like this.. 5/5

awesome dude, glad you also liked six six six thanks alot for the breakdown appreciate it alot homie

[dbeauluvswomen]

I'm listening to the first song "It's All Clear Now" at the moment..you came hard on this track the lyrics were great beat was sick too..just thought id drop in and say that cuz im feeling it...now on to track two

[Xray]

I'm listening to the first song "It's All Clear Now" at the moment..you came hard on this track the lyrics were great beat was sick too..just thought id drop in and say that cuz im feeling it...now on to track two

thanks bruh your tracks pretty decent yourself

[DelinQuent]

my bad for the late feed.

typing as i listen

1-beat is sick. delivery is perfect. rhymes are amazing. flow is crazy. sick ass diss song but good to hear the issue has been resolved. overall 9/10 good shit

2-gave feed in the topic for this. great song overall 9/10

3-beat is weird. not into it. flow is good, rhymes are also good. chorus is good. didnt really enjoy this song too much though. mostly the beat turned me off and i wasnt really feeling the concept. 6/10

4-nice beat. flow is crazy and the rhymes are nasty. fuck what everyone says about the chorus, i liked it lmfao. very simple and kinda catchy. flow is even better in the second verse. loved the 3rd verse. my favorite track so far 9.5/10

5-i like the beat, tash did a good job. flow is good. rhymes are good. "didnt mean to fuck the world but it felt great" LMFAO great line. song got much better after it was half over.sounds like an outro, a great track 9/10

6-beat is trippy, i like this one better, the mellow beat matches the song much better. 10/10

OVERALL-a very very solid tape, well worth the listen. personal enjoyment 9.5/10

PS-where the fuck is my hook for magnetik? lol

[Tornado]

It's All Clear Now- Nice intro song, nothing really cathcing on the beat or lyrically but solid nonetheless

Trapped In A Plague- already left feed

Six Six Six- Ill Beat fits the concepts well but your voice sounds strained in partsand wtf is with the little silence before the fade out? didnt work for me that part but solid

Bump- Oh Yes- Pumpin beat, killer chorus, and yes you shine in this, lyrically and with your flow and good emotion...best song hands down..if you thinkin of a remix yknow who to pm

Filthy Beast- beat is good specially the strings but feels its missing something...but i love the emotion of it but not as lyrical as it could be

Trapped Remix--Beat sorry i actually love the original and the remix...theres nothing wrong with it but doesnt compare with the original...

Good EP...Keep Goin

[Nu Syd]

the quality on this could have sounded better IMO, the effects you use, boost a range that really brings inaudible sounds louder, doesn't sound as nice as it could, i think you going for to much wetness in the vocals, loses that natural sound and makes it a bit noisy. I been goin over your ep quality for awhile now, the effects chain aint my cup of tea.

[Tash8]

the quality on this could have sounded better IMO, the effects you use, boost a range that really brings inaudible sounds louder, doesn't sound as nice as it could, i think you going for to much wetness in the vocals, loses that natural sound and makes it a bit noisy. I been goin over your ep quality for awhile now, the effects chain aint my cup of tea.

why thank you, he doesn't understnad that... he also says it doesn't make a difference if the loudness is well above 0 db.

[Xray]

the quality on this could have sounded better IMO, the effects you use, boost a range that really brings inaudible sounds louder, doesn't sound as nice as it could, i think you going for to much wetness in the vocals, loses that natural sound and makes it a bit noisy. I been goin over your ep quality for awhile now, the effects chain aint my cup of tea.

why thank you, he doesn't understnad that... he also says it doesn't make a difference if the loudness is well above 0 db.

yep im still learning how to mix my vocals with this new microphone and your 100% right on the wetness in vocals part, which i why im trying to learn how to make the vocals balance on both the wetness and dryness part, which is a challenge but give me time thanks for the feed

props to dq and tornado.

[SawtootH]

ye , im gonna check this wen i get back of holidAy. (wich im on now)