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STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

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Re: STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 22nd, '08, 01:45

lol thanks for the feed tornado
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Re: STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

Postby DelinQuent » Jul 22nd, '08, 16:45

zshare isnt working right now.... but i'm gonna leave feed soon as it is.
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Re: STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

Postby DelinQuent » Jul 22nd, '08, 17:41

zshare is working now...

i like the chorus, im a fan of simplicity.

again you sound too angry for a love song lol.

flow is jumpy, some lines you spit fast, then the next you slow it down. rhymes are there but not the best.

the delivery is what put me off from this song, youre using the wrong emotion. this is supposed to be a smooth song and your delivery is very tense. you gotta smooth it down and use your real voice for a track like this. keep working not a terrible song, not a great song, a decent song :y:
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Re: STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 22nd, '08, 22:34

thx for the feed DQ :drunksigning:
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Re: STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 23rd, '08, 17:02

chorus aint good, mixing aint great and the flow is boyzone.


delivery is strong thought it was a little agressive and pressing for the concept but it wokrs in a different way witch is good at time other times its to intense. lyrically aint good but that aint the concept.


flow is a little stressed like your forcing it, but its ok at times.


content wise is exaclty what i expected and not original, even though it towards a girl try something different to make it stand out a little.


keep it up :y:
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Re: STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 23rd, '08, 23:03

like i said flow like you do on the chorus sounds way better
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Re: STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

Postby Kez » Jul 24th, '08, 03:02

Sick beat
Lol sorry but you don't sing v well :p
Again the same fierce delivery i dunno if it's apt for this topic
Flow is fine, though with another slow one again it sounds weird to me
Lyrics are pretty good for a love song
Quality sounds fine
Concept is good cause even though it's been done it sounds different to your average love song

So good track, but maybe next time you do a singing hook ask somebody else to do it for you (hint hint)

Nice track

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Re: STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 24th, '08, 10:42

u defo got the delivery....but the wrong one in this track....maybe a bit more emotional and more calme....
quality is actually really good :y:
u gotta work on ur flow.....was off almost the whole song :sweating: in the 3rd verse you was on beat from time to time
pronouncation is allright nuttin to complain about it
and i KINDA agree wut Maybe said....there a better vocalist which can do this type of hook waayyyy better lol(no shit)...but it didnt bother me too much...thought it was okay

for the beat: not my type of beat...dont like the melody.. :y:
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Re: STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 24th, '08, 11:38

thx for the feed
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Re: STICCY Z!!! NEW SONG "IM ALWAYS HERE" PRODUCED BY TASH8

Postby Rapsoldier101 » Aug 4th, '08, 10:26

second tash beat i heard, and i was really feelin it. and sticcy z it sounded like ur flow was off a lil but over all it was a decent track :y:
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