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Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 29th, '08, 05:59

Zshare: http://www.zshare.net/audio/161506410c831da4/
Download: http://www.zshare.net/audio/161506410c831da4/

If you want sent personally add me on msn and i'll get it to you.
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 29th, '08, 06:13

as ive said before...you have improved leaps and bounds...
your flow was off at times...but i was impressed with the lyrics
you have gotten so much better...good job

sajjad was peeeeeeeeeeeerfect on the hook great job

kez your shit was good
flow was there
your still rapping about the same ole shit
you should switch it up a bit homie :y:

overall good track 7/10
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 29th, '08, 06:17

thanks bro :y:
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby °[~CHR!$~]° » Jul 29th, '08, 11:19

actually same feed as for the preview mix....
welll volume problems are pretty much fixed :worship: sajjad...u kill it again lol
for blue ...ur flow is still a pretty messy....as i said...in delievery u do everything right but ur delievery doesnt fit this track...
kez his verse was fixed...way clearer now...nice verse :y: lmao @ your singing.. :sweating:
btw who produced this?
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby ,-,'-{Bar}-',-, » Jul 29th, '08, 12:22

the chorus, sounds like somehting you would hear on a linkin park track, or that sort of genre, its dope though, mixed really well. good work man :y:


first, delivery is a little stressed but its probs just your voice it aint bad, flow is alot better than your old stuff, little bits you fall off beat, didnt sound confident when spittin some of the lyrics, the lyrics were nice some good wordplay nice rhymes. overall the best verse i heard form you


seconds verse, kez your flow is on there think you a little laid back in delivery sometimes but it aint to bad, the lyrics were good, overall its was probly a average verse for you, enjoyable :happy:


defiantly worth a listen and a good collab guys :y:
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby Kez » Jul 29th, '08, 16:20

Obvious improvement in mixing :y:

@Sajjad: It wasn't that bad :p Though you did mix it a tiny bit off beat so it sounded even worse but still miles better than the last one :p

@Sticcy: Thanks, i know sometimes i do but don't worry there's different things in the works

@Chet: Thanks, are you real? :shifty:

@Bar: Thanks, i dunno bout the delivery you're right it could of been better
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby Tash8 » Jul 29th, '08, 16:59

i'm not feeling chorus ur not in tune with the beat...

blue u gotta work on ur delievery u sound like ur screaming but it sounds weird as fuck..

kez nice verse.
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby Kez » Jul 29th, '08, 17:03

Thanks Tash :b:
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby DelinQuent » Jul 29th, '08, 21:30

glad you changed your name lmfao

gave ya feed for your verse already :y:

chorus is AMAZING

kez has nice rhymes, and a nice flow, but the delivery is lacking, ya sound bored. but still the better verse of the two due to lyrics and flow.

overall a 8/10 because of the chorus and kez's flow and lyrics. with more emotion in kez's verse and a better flow from blue this track would be fire.
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 29th, '08, 22:19

Thanks people guess my flow's pretty much my only problem now I'll work on it.
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby <Stiiccy> » Jul 29th, '08, 22:59

djblue wrote:Thanks people guess my flow's pretty much my only problem now I'll work on it.

that and your delivery needs to be perfected..
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby Tash8 » Jul 30th, '08, 03:48

that and your lyrics, concepts, u also need to find your own style...

believe me u need a lot of work... it's not just get a flow and bam, that's what many people think...
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby Speech » Jul 30th, '08, 08:34

°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:actually same feed as for the preview mix....
welll volume problems are pretty much fixed :worship: sajjad...u kill it again lol
for blue ...ur flow is still a pretty messy....as i said...in delievery u do everything right but ur delievery doesnt fit this track...
kez his verse was fixed...way clearer now...nice verse :y: lmao @ your singing.. :sweating:
btw who produced this?


oh there is a fixed version, cool....pretty much what chris said...and this is a sinima beat, wanted to use it to...but a whole nother chorus in thought...sajjad's did it tho
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby <VerbalTouch> » Jul 31st, '08, 23:45

go ahead and use it i dont have a copyright on it :tounge2:
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Re: Still be me Final Mix (Y)

Postby KDEWolf » Jul 31st, '08, 23:58

Tash8 wrote:i'm not feeling chorus ur not in tune with the beat...

blue u gotta work on ur delievery u sound like ur screaming but it sounds weird as fuck..

kez nice verse.

Kez ur mic is really bad u better toss it lol.

Speech wrote:
°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:actually same feed as for the preview mix....
welll volume problems are pretty much fixed :worship: sajjad...u kill it again lol
for blue ...ur flow is still a pretty messy....as i said...in delievery u do everything right but ur delievery doesnt fit this track...
kez his verse was fixed...way clearer now...nice verse :y: lmao @ your singing.. :sweating:
btw who produced this?


oh there is a fixed version, cool....pretty much what chris said...and this is a sinima beat, wanted to use it to...but a whole nother chorus in thought...sajjad's did it tho


Which Beat is it?
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