[NEW] SHUT THE FUCK UP FEAT. SAJJAD [HOT]

by **Xray** » Jul 28th, '08, 08:03

upping for more feedback :y:

by **,-,'-{Bar}-',-,** » Jul 28th, '08, 12:02

first verse, your attempt at an agressive delivery doesnt work, and it sounds like you are screaming about nothing, lyrical average, flow is technically good, but i aint feeling it. chorus isnt to good aint feeling it.

second verse, sajjad does the agressive flow and deliveyr but i can understanding everything, flow is great, you got some excellent use of variation when spitting this, lyrically its good nothing mind blowing but its works, overall sick verse man :y:

third verse, the devliery is toned down and it helps the flow a bit, more enjoyable, lyrically average.

dont like the beat to much

decent track, sajjad killed it :y:

by **Xray** » Jul 28th, '08, 12:53

McMaybe wrote:First verse was average lyrics wise. Style was outstanding. Sajjed murdered. Flow was almost perfect.

Quality was decent, Chorus should of been mixed better.

overall: 7.5/10

thanks bro :y:

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:first verse, your attempt at an agressive delivery doesnt work, and it sounds like you are screaming about nothing, lyrical average, flow is technically good, but i aint feeling it. chorus isnt to good aint feeling it.

second verse, sajjad does the agressive flow and deliveyr but i can understanding everything, flow is great, you got some excellent use of variation when spitting this, lyrically its good nothing mind blowing but its works, overall sick verse man

third verse, the devliery is toned down and it helps the flow a bit, more enjoyable, lyrically average.

dont like the beat to much

decent track, sajjad killed it

thanks alot bro, glad you liked the verse :b:

by **Nu Syd** » Jul 30th, '08, 06:11

great song, the intro was alil to long for my likeing, but overall, flows and verses was on point, great stuff, sajjad your flow is outrageous on this lol :y:

, great topic to :b:

by **Speech** » Jul 30th, '08, 08:09

beat was very nice....that "shut tha fuck up bitch" melodie just made my day...the chorus itself doubles the feeling *no homo*

well first verse was hard to understand...accent thing...not hating the accent but the bad pronnounciation(which is caused by the accent i guess) messed it up....listend again and heard some of the shit, simple but, suits the concept for real yo
quality is fuckin fire...n' both of you have the same quality, didn sound like a e-colab...nice feeling

some how, sajjad's verse was hard to understand AT THE BEGINNING....you posted the lyrics so everything was clear then...fire verse..simple too, but again suiting :y:

last verse, i didn enjoy...you should have left it with 2 verses or get a 3rd person (not speakin of me :shifty:

) on it

track was nice, all i can say...keep that catchy shit up....plus i didn see any eminem in this :unsure:

good job guys

ps. MAKE ME A CATCHY BEAT LIKE THAT :angry:

peace

by **Xray** » Jul 30th, '08, 13:29

^^^thanks to both :worship:

and yeah spizzy we both got condenser mics and i tried mixing my acapella similar to his acapellas so thats why :y:

by **Xray** » Aug 2nd, '08, 03:32

bump

by **randomghost** » Aug 3rd, '08, 20:29

loved the track....both verse are hot :y:

nice beat.....keep them comin :8)

by **B.A.D.** » Aug 5th, '08, 19:00

hmmm intro is good but a bit boring

beat is amazing, excelent beat

first verse starts powerfull, lovin the energy on it, and flow n everythang else is great great :y:

hook is amazing :y:

lovin it

Sajjad :worship:

amazing power... damn, I fuckin love the energy on this track

100/100
:y:

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the most annoying 2 coming soon..............

by **Xray** » Aug 6th, '08, 02:47

Big Ax-D wrote:hmmm intro is good but a bit boring

beat is amazing, excelent beat

first verse starts powerfull, lovin the energy on it, and flow n everythang else is great great

hook is amazing lovin it

Sajjad amazing power... damn, I fuckin love the energy on this track

100/100

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the most annoying 2 coming soon..............

props homie, appreciate the breakdown :worship:

by **Jay-19** » Aug 6th, '08, 12:59

Wow, Sajjad is killing this! Really great spitting from him!

And you're not bad either Blind, but I'm having a hard time figure out what you're saynig at some parts of the songs. But the things I can hear is the bomb. The beat is cool, the hook is fucking awesome! :y: