C-Riz-I'm on my Own [PROMO]

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yep here i am again....
this is a instrumental from a royce track prod. by alchemist...
just a promo track one verse and a hook
C-Riz-I'm On My Own
http://www.zshare.net/audio/16363354844cecdc/

enjoy

[Nu Syd]

i thought you didnt like alchemist beats u bhum whole , downloading now

[<Stiiccy>]

loved your delivery
ehh didnt like that beat...it didnt fit you...you would go way better on a grimey beat
flow was ok slipped at times
lyrics were good...maybe you tried to throw to much into 1 bar

overall it was ok

[Xray]

beat is nice. i think your lyrics are getting better. flow was kinda messed up on some areas, delivery was not bad. cool song man. keep working

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx...yeah wasnt unsure about my "fast flow" focused more on lyrics this time thx for checkin guyz

[Speech]

haha oh shit i love this beat yo...got the same version of it...you did good...flow fucked up 2 or 3 times..your lyrics is getting better....i see, you tryin to be more complex, tryin to compare shit to....other shit lamo but it's cool...you on the best way of learning...keep it up

peace

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx man

[DelinQuent]

beat is sick.

flow is decent but it needs a lot of work. it keeps falling off in spots.

lyrics are pretty good. pronunciation needs work but its not terrible. rhymes are decent.

not a fan of the chorus.

keep working, you're definitely improving

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz Dq appreciate it man

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

bump?

[Tash8]

flow was a bit better, but u seem to be slipping a bit still.. pronounciation wasn't great on this one, i don thtink i understood even 30%...

hook is pretty awful honestly, it could have been better if the beat matched what u were going for but that wasn't the case

but overall ok track, the other track u posted was a lot better.

[B.A.D.]

mutherfucker this is a masterpiece!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

lyrics are amazing, great choice of beat, the verse is genious, some of the best verses I've hurd from you

hook I didn't liked it that much, but damn, amazing track

URD!!!

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the most annoying pt.2 coming soon...............

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz ax-d
glad u liked it
cant wait for TMA 2

[SajN]

Good beat .. I like it!

You sounded good on this, I didn't get the lyrics so much lol .. but delivery is cool!
Nice one

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yo u both..thx non stop
and chet im waiting man... ....if u are real? or do i collab wit bar,tash or sajjad im kiddin....looking forward to work wit ya
thx for checkin guyz...glad it was understandable even i tried a "faster" flow..for you...weird that tash had problems and u understand it better oh well