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Re: STUDIO TRACK: (REMEMBER ME??)

Postby HAYZI » Aug 2nd, '08, 13:33

,-,'-{Bar}-',-, wrote:wasnt excpecting that approach, i dunno what to think of it, you flow on it is great and lyrics are ncie, i aint feeling the beat too much, tito was flowing good nto as good as you but was there, lyrics were ok, third verse was really the same as your 1st, and the 4th is same as titos second.


i can see the apeal in the track if you like this style and you do it well so does tito, but i just aint feeling it to much.




fair enough mate i know ur not rele into that style of track its just thats titos style and considerin i use his studio and we both have limited time, unfortunatley a few of my recent tracks have been a similar style but in a way it suits me cos my prodcution style now is mainly dance music so im lookin to make beats that are a mix of prodigy, bassment jaxx and t2 so spittin to fast music that makes u wanna dance is good.
i still dont like krunk shit that tito keps tryin to get me on definately not my style
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Re: STUDIO TRACK: (REMEMBER ME??)

Postby Tornado » Aug 6th, '08, 02:38

really dancy kinda beat..chorus to me sounds catchy...your verses flow is good, nice flow on it, lyrics are decent, yr boy tito flow was not as good plus i found it hard to understand him for some lines..though this is my first time checkin you, justthink on a normal beat, i might ssee u better
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Re: STUDIO TRACK: (REMEMBER ME??)

Postby Mc Cubz » Aug 9th, '08, 21:59

I like this track but there are big points that could be improved on!
you know I wouldn't consider this that good quality - I would want better sound clarity for a mixtape, it sounds like you may have got a low-quality version of the instrumental - ideally you want minimum 3kb or whteva - but I duno this isnt my area - ask producers about this

with you hayzi its always the same - u have a sound that is so charasmatic - its kind of annoying how much potential you have lol - I wish you had more time for this rap shit cos ud b murking it up - u got a powerfull voice - combined with titos less strong voice - u kind of dominate the track - and I duno if the styles are complimentary,

i think u could improve slightly on ur pronunciation/timing of certain words - Its obvious ur nasty - if u just spent a little more time making your verses perfect before u mix it all down it would b even better.

if this is an american beat - it has a strong uk feel, cos of the faster beat etc,
I knw some ppl wnt like this more hyped club typa song but I just came back from ayia napa so I have been raving to bassline/garage for 2 weeks lol so I like it!

id love to do a track like this wid u man, u wana pm me I need to talk to u about some other shit lol!
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