More Practise

[<VerbalTouch>]

K about this lyrics werent done by me but eminem but i was showen off infront of my home boys lol made it just for fun but eh why not get some feedback nothing wrong with using other people lyriics for practise eh? lol

http://www.zshare.net/audio/175881223d05833f/

[Jay-19]

I won't lie, that wasn't good. Your to slow, it sounds like you're stretching the word to make them fit the beat and shit. I don't see anything wrong in using someone elses lyrics for practice, but if you really want to get better, you should write your own raps.

By the way, I love your raspy voice man! Sounds hella gangsta!

[<VerbalTouch>]

thanks

[Robbie G]

I liked it but I felt like your flow was too slow.

Good rapping voice though.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Seriously stop with the voice sarcasm