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Postby shadyz_babee3 » Nov 24th, '05, 00:18

hey yo its crazy wack
when someone tells you they got your back
but they dont, instead of winning you lose
but its not like you had the choice to choose
sometimes i feel so lonley
and i need someone there to console me
i look around and feel so out of place
its almost like im gone without a trace
it may seem like my life is good and im happy
but its not, and accually im feelin crappy
it seems like my problems dont even matter
they build up like a fat man gettin fatter
it would be nice to have something in my life thats new
like to know that someone is accually thinking of you
but it seems like no one even cares
when i cry people give me awkward stares

chorus:
if in your life you have no one there to care
then raise your arm and put that finger in the air
if in your life everthing seems unfair
then raise your arm and put that finger in the air

im trapped in this world i do not know
i feel like a caged animal with nowhere to go
this life is hard and it aint easy or fun
i have no where no place to run
writing rhymes is my one God givin gift
im dreaming and hoping that the tables will soon shift
but for now im alone, its been that way for awhile
i usually deal with it and put on a smile
but behind that smile is someone in pain
its my world and my tears are its rain
but im losing my grip
the captin goes down with the ship
except on this ship there is more than one captin
and those are the people that made this happen
those are the ones that made me the way i am
but now my life has come to an abrupt hault like a car crashing...BAM!!!

(repeat chorus)
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Postby ThomasAguanis » Nov 24th, '05, 19:53

its pretty good. i enjoyed reading it. i know i felt some of the lyrics myself before.
if you have anyother spngs post them up.
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:)

Postby shadyz_babee3 » Nov 24th, '05, 19:54

thanx u really think itz good?
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Postby shadys_lady28 » Nov 24th, '05, 22:14

i think its awesome!!! :D
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lol

Postby shadyz_babee3 » Nov 24th, '05, 22:18

LOL :beerchug:
The ADHD Poem:
roses are red,
violets are blue,
i have ADHD,
... hey look there is a butterfly!
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Re: lol

Postby shadys_lady28 » Nov 26th, '05, 17:04

shadyz_babee3 wrote:LOL :beerchug:


no i am serious! i love it!
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