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Upcoming Verse

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 26th, '08, 19:43

this is a verse I keystyled today for an upcoming project

in my life their is no First Prize
here today gone tomorrow my Hurt Pride
I might disappear in front of Yur Eyes
all alone writing lines as I Merc Lies
ever so hidden as I put my Heart In This
time is a prison so whose Guarding It
this world is home to wars and Starving Kids
I light these tracks on fire like it's Arson Bitch
call it tha Flames Of Change cuz I already Gave Ya Rain
when they ask u Say Tha Name there is no Fame Ta Gain
I don't need to be Well Known or a ringtone on a Cell Phone
a potion of all Wealth Owned will go to bring Myself Home
back to a distant Memory before they decided to End Yur Peace
it's got my Friends Worried if so u care Then Hurry
believe I can see this fuse getting Shorter
there is no America they erased our Borders
globalist death squads just around tha Corner
how many death's for their new world Order
killing has no cause their glorifying Murder
they control tha money so were all Workers
thats why I stay broke with every Verse Heard
looking for a future is still tha Sure Search

by tha way if u liked that there is a new song on my myspace called "Dangers In Tha Dark"
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Re: Upcoming Verse

Postby Arabian Shady » Aug 26th, '08, 19:50

dude the flow was the best part about this verse, really really dope man :y:
sick rhymes as well, my fav line tho was:

this world is home to wars and Starving Kids
I light these tracks on fire like it's Arson Bitch


dope stuff
Peace
ArAbIaN ShAdY


We're all on the same page, Yet we're standing apart on different lines'
So when we face rage, Ya'll fake it and let THEM commit horrific crimes
50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
"Front Page",Arabian Shady


FiNd mE At dA "CREATIVE SECTION", I AM ULTIMATE INNOVATION!!
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Re: Upcoming Verse

Postby Emadyville » Aug 26th, '08, 20:12

Sick rhymes, sick flow, great content, if this was off the top that is SICK!! Love how you got into some politics at the end, really agreed with your views on that shit, great job. :y: :y:
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Re: Upcoming Verse

Postby Robbie G » Aug 26th, '08, 20:17

Nice man. Kind of reminded me of immortal technique at the end. :y:
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Re: Upcoming Verse

Postby Rain Matrix » Aug 27th, '08, 02:55

thanks everyone I just went with what came out
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Re: Upcoming Verse

Postby Ka0t1c » Aug 27th, '08, 04:23

yeah, like it!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Upcoming Verse

Postby Emadyville » Aug 27th, '08, 22:37

Kaotic wrote:yeah, like it!


You're actually adding to the post instead or saying random shit? Where have I been?
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