Close my Eyes (ft. Big Ax-D)

[<VerbalTouch>]

I wasn't going to release this yet but thought I'd get feed back and heres a couple of updates

Since I liked the beat of this so well Ive decided to make this track 1and call the cd Close My Eyes. I shouldnt really be giving out all the tracks I record so everyone wont be like, Heard em all before and they suck

Title: Close my eyes ft big ax-d
Album: Close My eyes
LINK: http://www.zshare.net/audio/176935994a31e2d7/




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[enjinn]

im really feelin the beat...dope melody...and a good verse too...sick hook...holla atcha boi!

[<VerbalTouch>]

Thanks man looking forward to that collab also

[B.A.D.]

oh lol haha

hmm, change the topic title to Close my Eyes (ft. Big Ax-D).... cuz "fine take it" doesn't seem interesting to click in lol

also... I Produced the beat people!!!! so if ya want any custom beat with sampling holla at me

now bump!

[<VerbalTouch>]

Bumping this also damn thought it was a good track

[DelinQuent]

you're white, dont say the N word.

delivery is super boring, not gonna listen to your verse a second time. rhymes were simple, flow wasnt very good.

i cant listen to your second verse because you again use the N word.

ax came with some good shit. flow was good. message was great. loved this verse. one of my faves from you

beat was sick too. loved the sample.

[<VerbalTouch>]

haha

People get too worked up when you say ni.gga and heres a good example of a person taht does

[<Stiiccy>]

you're white, dont say the N word.

delivery is super boring, not gonna listen to your verse a second time. rhymes were simple, flow wasnt very good.

i cant listen to your second verse because you again use the N word.

ax came with some good shit. flow was good. message was great. loved this verse. one of my faves from you

beat was sick too. loved the sample.

he can say whatever he wants...its a free country we have that right
if a black person gets to say it
then everone gets to say it
why does the word offend you so much?
i never could understand that about you DQ
you get offended by shit thats not directed towards you
its preety pathetic if you ask me
trying to win over the black boys by taking up for them hahaha
very humoring

there is no such thing as a fucking double standerd fuck what people think

anywayz ax-d great verse bro 10/10
blue your gettin there bud just keep tryin

[<VerbalTouch>]

dq why didnt you say your not listening to axds verse he said ni.gga

[$0 R3@L]

pathetic on all counts.

[DelinQuent]

sticcy... youre being disrespectful. for your info my best fucking friend is black. ive been best friends with him since the first day of first grade, that was 13 years ago. we grew up in a white town, ive dealt with racism all my life. the word offends me because i grew up with him and id easily stand up and fight for him any day. so when i hear the word being used by a white person i take just as much offense as a black guy would. so don't try to say i'm trying to win over the black guys. you just sound ignorant and stupid. and so what that it's not directed toward me, i still find the word highly offensive when used by white people. i'm not saying he doesn't have the right to say it, im saying, being white it shows total lack of respect to be using that word.

[MoBrat]

sticcy... youre being disrespectful. for your info my best fucking friend is black. ive been best friends with him since the first day of first grade, that was 13 years ago. we grew up in a white town, ive dealt with racism all my life. the word offends me because i grew up with him and id easily stand up and fight for him any day. so when i hear the word being used by a white person i take just as much offense as a black guy would. so don't try to say i'm trying to win over the black guys. you just sound ignorant and stupid. and so what that it's not directed toward me, i still find the word highly offensive when used by white people. i'm not saying he doesn't have the right to say it, im saying, being white it shows total lack of respect to be using that word.

dont even start with this shit tr has seen emough of this conflict...personally i agree with DQ but its time 2 get over the past it is not meant in the same way when it was invented yes ppl still get offended but no offence intened sayin only black ppl can say this word is also rasist in a way only cause it dont mean what it did when they made it, i wasn't around then n i dont like the meaning they gave it but the meaning has changed

anyways i've had 2 many of these talks im done as 4 the song, sample fit nice with this track, ax-d again another good beat, dont know blue ur verse has decent lyrics but flow needs work quality as well, ax-d ur verse is nice good lyrics n flow overall not bad could be better

[Kez]

When he showed me the track i asked him why he said the N word, and thought he ought not to put it up. However, that was just because it's taboo.

Not that i think he's racist, or that it's wrong for him to use it (i mean if someone else can use it why can't he?), it's all about the context. It's not like he's using it in the way it was invented, like MoBrat said, he's using it like any black rapper would; like someone pointed out Ax used it in the verse, but nobody cares.

Of course, people will never let it go, that's why i suggested he just not bother. The "debate", if you'll call it that, is unwinnable. I would never do it because ignorant people would probably call me racist

As for the track:

Blue you still need practise, your delivery is kinda Rain-Matrixish. Still sound kinda bored with bits of anger shoved in. Flow seemed a bit inconsistent. Lyrics were decent but could have been better.
Hook singing from you was also pretty bad, to be honest.
Ax's verse had a good flow though, lyrics were nice
And his hook sounded better, probably because of the subtle use of auto-tune; i didn't notice he'd used it till a while in. Plus, it actually fit here.

[Jay-19]

I think it's like this, there's three ways to say the n-word.

1. Nigger = Disrespectful and just plain racism. Nigger is just a lavatory word and shouldn't be said.
2. Nigga = That's alright to say from my point of view, if you mean it in the right way. Black people use it all the time, so why shouldn't everybody else? I mean, you don't walk up to a random black dude and just say "nigga" for nothing. But if you know him a little and he's cool and shit, I think you can say like "what up niggah?" with a positive tone, you know?
3. Nigguhhh = Man, I say this all the time to my black friends. They don't get offended, and why should they? It's not like I mean it in a bad way. They know me well and i know them well, so they know I don't mean any harm by saying it.


Now for the song. Pretty dope. Though you need to work on your delivery Blue, other than that, you got nice lyrics and a solid flow. Like the chorus as well.
Big Ax-D, you did good on this track. Not the best I've heard from you, but still good.

[<Stiiccy>]

sticcy... youre being disrespectful. for your info my best fucking friend is black. ive been best friends with him since the first day of first grade, that was 13 years ago. we grew up in a white town, ive dealt with racism all my life. the word offends me because i grew up with him and id easily stand up and fight for him any day. so when i hear the word being used by a white person i take just as much offense as a black guy would. so don't try to say i'm trying to win over the black guys. you just sound ignorant and stupid. and so what that it's not directed toward me, i still find the word highly offensive when used by white people. i'm not saying he doesn't have the right to say it, im saying, being white it shows total lack of respect to be using that word.

You have dealt with racism?
try living in the fucking south
don't start that shit with me dude, everone has gone through that...dont make yourself look like a victim
and dude words dont mean shit...Ax used it but you said nothing
your being ignoret, and making it sound like theres a double standerd