!!NEW!! C-Riz ft SaJJad-On Fire

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

okay people here we go once again
C-Riz is back with Mr.S to the A......its URD folks!!!!
enuff talk....here's the track

C-Riz ft SaJJad - On Fire
http://www.zshare.net/audio/180020125bb9bd67/

enjoy.... leave feed/hate or poo

[Speech]

beats cool
first c-riz verse was better i think
sajjad verse was cool, heard better from you but it was enjoyable...the adlib parts were smart but didn reach me that much
2. c-riz verse was ok but like i said, 1st one was better to me
chorus was caaaatchy haha On fiiiiaaaaaaahhhh!!!! damn nice one
sajjad's mixin was different...not as good as always but ok
and c-riz, you rap loud an clear but got a lil off flow in 1st verse...u learned to have lil voids in the lyrics so you can catch a breath thatz good, lus that way you shouldn lose control over your flow...practise that and you'll be good

nice track
keep it up

[SajN]

nice beat!


C-Riz: Nice verses. I think you got a little off flow in both verses, but it was ok. Nice lyrics

Hook: hook is on fiiiiiiaaaaaaaaaaahhhh! Enuff said..

Sajjad: You sounded a bit different... I think .. But you sounded good tho .. Good verse and lyrics .. you were better than C-Riz


Can't say anything about mixing and stuff, cuz I don't know anything about it yet lol ..


Nice track!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thanks guyz hmm ....dont know actually where i went off flow...or prolly did lol..guess i need to work on it
keep the feed comin

[Xray]

cool track but has few problems like the overlays, breaks in your second verse, and volume of your verses. 2-3 db lower your verses.

my verse was mixed pretty bad. my chorus was annoying for me.

cool track but we both have done much better in the past

[Tash8]

listening, beat is aite the piano was kinda weirdly mixed..

chris possibly ur verse second to the 2nd track u ever did,

chorus is aite, probably best part of the song

sajjad's verse is alway ok, but i felt it needed to be double cuz c-riz was and it sounded really weird since it was soo different.

[enjinn]

nice track from both of you

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx for checkin... glad ya could enjoy it

[Tornado]

I GOT THIS BEAT TripleSick Beats or something like that...me and Chet can do a remix
yo on the chorus when you say "light it up we on fire" didnt you like the way you said it but sajjad did a aight job...C-Riz, werent nothing special and the same old problems remain (breath, flow in places) its an okay track but you both done better

[<Stiiccy>]

beat was tight

C-riz - your emotions are kinda weird i think you try to go hard but you can't try to perfect them
lyrics were good, but again the accent sometimes gets in the way

Sajjad - wasnt the best verse from you, but it was good...i loved the adlibs hahahahahahha good verse tho

hook was great yall i really liked it

overall 7/10

[B.A.D.]

¨nice beat

whoa!! C-Riz starts with some amazing flow... damn, ur verse is crazy, some of the best I've hurd from you, crazy crazy!! lyrics are TOP of level

Hook is amazing, one of the best hook's I've hurd from SA

Sajjad comes in real real strong, hot flow, the little like cuts didn't fit my listening, but ur lyrics were to hot then, so its all good... amazing verse

C-Riz third verse, starts real real nice, same great flow, I liked the first verse better, but still an excelent last verse

overall: amazing job, excelent production, top notch mixing, all I can say is: masterpiece!!

btw: you bastards didn't invited me to the song lol

URD!

great work

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

propz all *counts* three of you...
oh well keep bitchin about my accent...i wont and dont know how to change it so yeah
at ax.... sry i just wanted to get this out..talk to ya later about this

[Jay-19]

This was a tight track! Freaking crazy delivery and some tight lines, sick lyrics dudes!

You both did equally good on this I think. The hook is crazy! Sajjad always brings fire to the hooks!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

thx you both...means a lot
@maybe..sure...i can give u my parts...but sajjad mixed his own stuff so i dont have his parts

[mart85]

this sucks... I really couldn't enjoy it at all, I was dissapointed by it



oh btw, I was leaving feedback on the non-working zshare link I'll leave feed once I manage to listen to it lol