Jay-19 - Saints (now with Tash's mixing)

[Jay-19]

New track from me.
Mixed by C-Riz, and even though he did a great job mixing it, the vocals lacks quality in my opinion. But that's not C-Riz's fault, because he really made it a hundred times better than it was before. But if anybody wants to give it a try about making it even better, just holler.

Tried some different in this track, try to change my voice more and the hook is just experimental. Wanted to try something new, so if you like, thanks, if you don't, oh well.

Here's the track:
jay-19 - saints.mp3 - 5.48MB


Here's the final mixing from Tash, thank you man.
http://www.zshare.net/audio/18090001955d4803/

[SajN]

Really nice beat!

(is it exlusive or free )


I loved your first verse! Nice lyrics, I understood a lot.
Same goes with your 2nd verse and 3rd... I don't have anything to complain about I guess

Except for the hook, I didn't like it

Plus, I think the volum of the beat was a lil too high, sometimes it "overshadowed" your lyrics..
It would been better if your vocals where a lil higher.. or the beat's volume slower..

But a great song
Liked your voice and lyrics!

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah really great track....the structure of the song as a whole was a bit messed
but pronouncation was sick...and lyrics...handsdown
flow was kool too....the raw singin was pretty awful lmao...but after adding that echo i think it was a bit better...
so yeah everything to kool...just the structure was weird....but great lyrics....are u a "beginner" or did you do audio for longer now?

[Jay-19]

Thanks guys.

Glad you liked the most of the song. The hook is just something I wanted to try out. Maybe I'll do a remake of the song.

And I wouldn't say I'm a newbie at audio, but I'm not experienced either. So I deff think I can get a lot better.

But thanks for the feed guys!

[B.A.D.]

hmm, I'm pretty sure I've hurd this beat before

you're quality problems is bcuz of ur mic, you must be using a real shitty one hahaha, but yea c-riz mixing's shows greatly, excelent job there

lyrics are real real good, so as the flow, excelent job there

hook... not really my type... for that kind of sining u should use autotune

second verse starts a little off, but still good

anyways, excelent track, def great stuff

*downloads*

[Jay-19]

Thanks a lot for the feed Ax-D! And Tash is trying to fix the hook with autotune, so we'll see how that turns out.

[SajN]

where's the beat from?

[Xray]

god damn, this track is the bomb. man i love your emotion put into this. the accent the flow the delivery is fuckin dope

if you have the raw acapellas please do send it my way, i can make your acapellas sound real fuckin nice.

[Jay-19]

@ The Infection, it's just a free beat I found on the internet.

@ Xray, really glad you liked it man! And since both C-Riz and Tash been/is trying to clear my fucked up quality I don't see any problem in why you can't do the same.

[Jay-19]

I just hope they don't get offended by it. Like I think they suck at mixing or anything.

[Tash8]

I just hope they don't get offended by it. Like I think they suck at mixing or anything.

is cool wit me, it's better that you try to find someone that can fix up ur quality best and use him for ur other mixing projects.

[Jay-19]

It's like a competition now, who'll mix it the best to win the fine price of mixing Jay-19?

[Kez]

Beat is sick
Flow is great shit, sounds great
Lyrics some v meaningful lines there, sick rhymes
Delivery works well on the verses for the concept
Hook i didn't really like, not too good, it was like you were singing to it but it was quite off
I never judge on quality unless it's really bad, so

Didn't like the abrupt ending.

[Jay-19]

@ McMaybe
Thanks man. means a lot coming from you since you keep so high standards on your songs and still gives me an 8.5 despite the lack of quality.

@ Kez
Thanks to you to, glad you liked the most. And i think the ending is pretty alright...? But oh well, can't like everything.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

the beat sounds like its from slantize ? anywae real nice beat.


flow is good, lyrics are nice some good rhymes and multi's.


you need to work on the distinctness in your projection, you lose words halfway in the sometimes and it muddles them together, but i know by expeirence its hard for you to hear that coz its your way of speaking. it doesnt ruin the track though.


overall was a nice track, i didnt like the hook at all and it ruined replay value for me. but apart from that and the mixing it was solid. good work