[NEW] Jay-19 Feat. SajN - Northern Lights

[enjinn]

i was feeling both verses...had some good lines...good track...damn, are there any americans on this site?!

[SajN]

Thanks for the feed guys!

[Tash8]

i was feeling both verses...had some good lines...good track...damn, are there any americans on this site?!

hell yea, we're the typical americans, lazy as fuck so you never see us drop anything on here though.

[Kez]

Hmm.

Beat is sick, as usual from Rapitfly.

First guy was decent. Flow was decent, lyrics were pretty good but not in terms of concept. Comparing yourself to Biggie and Eazy? But a decent verse.

Hook is decent but it needs making louder and having an effect or somethin added to seperate it from the verses.

SajN, i'm the last guy to hate accents but i couldn't understand most of yours without reading the lyrics. Work on your pronunciation. Lyrics were meh, the concept in general could be done by anyone. Your flow is decent but falls off many times.

I got to agree with SaJJad about this collab; Jay-19 is clearly more experienced, it's not fair to collab with a newcomer because you just completely outshine him.

Keep up though Only way to go is up. I'd suggest getting a bit better before either of you (particularly SajN) post something.

[Jay-19]

Thanks for the feed Kez. And that Biggie/Eazy-line, I was simply saying their spirits are in every rapper, including me.

[SajN]

Thanks Kez


yeah, I see now that I messed up a bit with pronounciation and maybe the voice
I got better "accent" than that, but maybe when I rapped this verse I messed it up for me ..


But thanks, and next time I'll try better