*First Studio Track* - Never Forget Me

[Boston]

this is both our first time in an actual studio

hes the first verse im the second, anything you would have to say would help

thanks yall

http://www.zshare.net/audio/187237742e2a8281/

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

first verse - flows good, delivery isnt energetic enough and needs more emotion the vocals are to low or hollow in the mix, rhymes were good and a solid verse otherwise

Second verse - same mixing problem, to low or to hollow, your flows sick, rhymes are good and you got more emotion and energy than the first guy.


remix the vocals a and itd be alot betetr double up the layers to get them with more depth.


beat was kool, hook was good.


decent track, keep it up

[Requiem]

Great track! incredible beat, great mixing, tho vocals aren't loud enough during some of it. the lyrics are great.

overall- 9/10. wonderful track.

and is that Akon during the hook??? sounds like him. if not, then nice vocals, u can sing. if either of u two are up to doing a track sometimes. hit me up, pm me.

[Tornado]

you both got good yrics and flow, you had better lyrics and emotion than the first guy..good choice of beat/hook..overall very nice for a first studio track, look forward to hearing more

[Fa$iC]

this is a great track dough, tha hook is dope and the beat the same.

first verse stuck a bit, but lyrics are good, the second kills the song, great job dudes,

I love it, i wanna hear more like this stuff, keep it up

[<Stiiccy>]

delivery was bad, flow wasnt to good either...
lyrics were preety dope tho..good message...and the dubs matched

hook was ok wasnt bad...

2nd guy was ok nothing mind blowing just decent...flow was better than the first guys..and the lyrics were a lil bit doper

song wasnt incredible but it didnt hurt my ears
try to develope a better more natural flow

7/10

[dbeauluvswomen]

ha i recorded to this same beat with akon on the hook sometime last year..nice to hear it again. I like the track the lyrics were on point.

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

yeah beat is just incredible..got this mad intro thing going on....
gotta agree....2nd guy has way more emotions...helps his flow a lot
gotta agree on the mixing problems aswell...+1-2db wouldnt hurt
lyrics are pretty decent....nuttin bad..nuttin THAT special
uhmm wut else....yeah...1st guy put more emotions in it
thatz it i guess..
overall solid track tho...minus the volume thing...

ps: i will never forget ya

[Boston]

thanks for all the feedback, and what do you mean by +1-2db or whatever. this guy didn't do anything special. just got into the booth and basically spit, he did some things, but were bound to go back. so im going to go back with more material next time obviously. so if anyone wants a collab PM me and we can work something nice out hopefully.

and sticcy, i respect what you have to say, but i honestly don't think MY flow is bad. any pointers though since you do? i can understand delivery, it was my first time in a booth, but even i dont think its THAT bad either. but thanks anyways

and for bar as well, im not familiar with tihs studio stuff, so that dubbing, or w/e i have to do, ill try to bring it up to him next time but any way you can dumb it down a little hah, thanks.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

and for bar as well, im not familiar with tihs studio stuff, so that dubbing, or w/e i have to do, ill try to bring it up to him next time but any way you can dumb it down a little hah, thanks.

is it a pro studio your in or a home studio ?


if its a pro and there is a engineer there ask him about making your vocals sound less hollow he should know what to do.


if its just you guys mixing it, put the vocals on the beat twice one accapella over the other it boosts the presence of the vocals, sometimes even mix 2 different takes together can it can sound better, just fuck around when you mixing (what program do you use?) and see what effects you like and shit.

[enjinn]

dope track...i was feeling both verses...you two have nice styles...hope to hear more from you soon

[Boston]

well 'pro' isn't the word, but there is an engineer. the only reason i say it really isnt pro, besides the 20 dollars an hour is basically idk. i believe he uses protools and shit but ill make sure next time i go, thanks.

[Boston]

thanks mcmaybe, can you tell me what verse you think is better lol

[<VerbalTouch>]

omg your cool with akon Sounds really hype like is that a last verse open? I'll attempt to try it out if its alright with you

[Angevilish]

the flow was sweet...it was simple & slow, but you performed it well. delivery wasn't bad, it could be a little better though. Lyircs were too simple, you gotta step it up buddy, Content however was great.

2nd guy: his quite better in general..Flow was more solid & the presence in his vocals was nice as well..Plus, he had some nice lyricism.
overall the shit was nice, I like it...Keep it up