Make It - New Track - New Studio **

[Boston]

well still not the best but damn better quality

but basically this is a quick verse i wrote, im the 2nd verse so let me know
leave a link to your tracks to please.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/5235997228238d0b/
http://www.mediafire.com/?sharekey=8182 ... b9a8902bda
http://la.gg/upl/01_MAKE_IT.mp3

Lyrics:

when i find myself writing shit, my tongue theres no biting it/
what i feel goes through the pen, i find myself reciting it/
you kidding me? no holding back, spitting heat all over tracks/
showing that, most are trash, cant fuck with me, those are facts/
i know that you liked my shit, "Josh please write my shit"/
just keep writing it, ill get on the mic n spit!"/
i knew you were feeling it, you never heard any realer shit/
yes the future of Lightz out, maybe cop a deal n shit/
but then you got sick of me, you tried to get rid of me/
bitch made me history, cuz i didnt rap officialy/
now i drop a verse a day, so now people heard the name/
now you have no words to say cuz im sick ,you heard the same/
now your back n reaching out, im using rap n speaking out/
if you lash the beast is out, get the gat, the piece is out/
all because you use to rap, dont get mad, your crew is wack/
so dont come on stupid raps, or ill come shooting back/

[Xray]

that verse man holy shit LOVED IT the lyrics haven't checked the track out yet...but i will soon...but damn bro those lines were just killer shit for real. loved the fucking flow on em you got mad skill

[DelinQuent]

your verse was pretty dope man.

delivery was great and the emotion was def there. rhymes were good and the flow was there.

overall the hook was weak as shit especially with lines like "you wont make it you're gay" lmfao.

your verse was great tho, keep it up

[Boston]

thanks for the feed you both. if you have any particular tracks you want me to feed leave me the link here haha and ill get to it ASAP

but xray, tell me what you think when you listen!

and deliquent. thanks and ya haha, the only reason i say judge my verse or im second verse is basically because right now im trying to make something out of me, and im trying to get on my feet and go solo but right now im having problems with money so im rapping with 2 kids who basically pay for my studio time. so yeah. but there my friends n everything justtt i want to go solo ha. but yeah thanks for both your feed.

keep it coming people

[Xray]

damn i think ya'll did awesome on this. i actually thought the chorus was dope. beat was fucking craZy.

verse 1 to verse 3 sick shit yo. you guys have a unique sound, sound nothing like any rapper on this forum. good shit 10/10

[Steve Spag]

I love the beat for it. Is it a VTZ one, 'cause it really sounds like something they'd do.
The hook is sick too, and that guy's first verse was pretty dope.
Your verse is really sick too, the flow is sick and I liked your wordplay. Nice multie's.
There were some parts that could be better with pronunciation and the flow kinda falls off for a quick second at one point, but it sounds really good.

Keep that shit up man!

[Jay-19]

Wow man! This track is tight!

I can almost feel your energy on your verse! That is some straight up sick delivery! The lyrics were cool and had some awesome multies. The beat is smooth and really good. The hook is solid as hell, I really like it.

Overall a really really great track! The quality is fire too!

[KDEWolf]

Like the lyrics but like DelinQuent said some other the wording was elementry. But regardless the track was pretty cool.

[Boston]

thanks xray, leave a few links of your stuff in here,i dont midn feeding, even though i think i already feeded one of your tracks haha. and yeah Steve, im pretty sure its vtz. thanks a lot for your feedback, i know what you mean.

thanks killah, lol when i go n record i just try to put everything i got into it ha. i feel free enough to do it. pft idk lol. and ya KDE. i know what you mean some shit could be worded better and all, some parts here were rushed.

thanks for the feed people, keep it coming ! ha

if you have any particular shit you want me to feed leave a link here or PM. thanks.

[Solace]

Love the beat, sick lyrics. Nice voice man, ive never heard your tracks so i didnt know how it sounds. Good flow too. But seriously man the lyrics And quality is excellent, so dont worry bout that. Excellent delivery/emotion. Didnt sound like you were bored, of course. It sounded raw man. Great job, 10/10.

[<VerbalTouch>]

damn man hit me up sometime love your shit

[<Stiiccy>]

1st verse had the best lyrics...nothing really to conplain about, i didnt see anything wrong with it..

2nd verse...sounded alot like a rapper that i know, named Filth-e...i really enjoyed this verse...my fav on the whole song...

3rd verse....the weakest of the 3...it was ok i guess, lyrics werent much...sunded alot like chamillionare...flow wasnt much either...

the hook was sooooo bad,,,you prolly wrote that shit in 1 min.

overall it was a preety damn good track...minus the horrible hook and the weaker 3rd verse...

7/10

[Speech]

dont see this as hate but you guys sounded so wiggerish on this one, thatz not bad but somehow it was underlined to me...i don even know why haha
but ok lez be fair
exept for the "your gay" part, the chorus had nice lyrics, and the flow was cool, enjoyable as fuck man
first verse had enough emotions and the matching flow, nice job
2 verse had more simple lyrics, but i liked the guys voice most, lil raspy and he showed more emotions
last verse wasn so interseting, he expanded the words a lil and rushed ends of bars a lil..but lyrics were ok
you ppl are nice as a team, work on solos tho
keep it up
peace

[Boston]

thanks sticcy, appreciate it man
im the 2nd guy, woot woot. ha na but ya i do appreciate the feed

and speech

one of the words got censored, what did you say
and ya i do agree my lyrics were semi-simple there
the thing is we were supposed 2 go to the studio to re-record tracks then at the last minute dude was like
"i got something for this track, write to it" absically. so i had to write that quick. but i appreciate all this feed from everyone. thanks a lot.

if you guys have anything particular for me to feed lemme know!

keep it coming

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

as spizzy said...flow is sick man....enjoyable....
lyrics are nice and the hook is laidback as fuck
good track