Make It - New Track - New Studio **

[Speech]

thanks sticcy, appreciate it man
im the 2nd guy, woot woot. ha na but ya i do appreciate the feed

and speech

one of the words got censored, what did you say
and ya i do agree my lyrics were semi-simple there
the thing is we were supposed 2 go to the studio to re-record tracks then at the last minute dude was like
"i got something for this track, write to it" absically. so i had to write that quick. but i appreciate all this feed from everyone. thanks a lot.

if you guys have anything particular for me to feed lemme know!

keep it coming

TRSHADY ARE YOU KIDDING ME??!!??! you are censoring WIQQA?!?!?!?! damn how wiQQerish must you ppl be lmao!!!
as for your track, as i said, it's not bad, its enjoyable haha
peace

[Boston]

haha good looks man

if yall want you can add me on msn, i just made a username so yeah, if yall want to talk music, or just w/e hit me up

JoshE_TheArtist@hotmail.com

[B.A.D.]

lol, I thought you was the first guy.. I was like... Vettori??? that you?? lmao

anyways, your verse is the best on the track, gotta say that

flow is your best aspect, rhymes are sick... we can defo collab when u want to

nice stuff

[Boston]

thanks a lot Ax, really means a lot man

[enjinn]

your verse is crazy!...really feeling it...other verses were nice too...dope track fo sho

[Boston]

thanks enjinn
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anyone else lol

[Vettori]

First verse was pretty good. Ull start soundin better, the more you record. Chorus was Nice, Melo voice, I feel it coul have been more hyped. Second verse guy has a sick voice, and if used better Could sound Even sicker. Progressing is the only thing you guys really need.If you stick to it the older you get the better youll get. I look at alot of my old shit and dislike it lol.. But the newer stuffs Awsome too me anyways.
Hmm third verse You kept it simple
Lacked energy. But overall it was good enough to Listen to
Ill check the next track you drop. Just lemme know when it does

You can check my stuff at http://www.myspace.com/VettorMusic Lemme know what you think

[Boston]

thanks a lot vettori

[rahul.never2far]

Propz mayn
The shit's awesome
The track was tight

[Boston]

thanks a lot
hopefully i can get back into the studio by 2morrow

[Mc Cubz]

I would love to hear this since its getting good feed - although zshare is not working for me I just load a blank page and kez is having a similar problem - dunno why but anyway could someone please upp it to another file-sharing site.. thanks!

[Boston]

thanks man
i pmed you the links and edited my first post!

[Mc Cubz]

thank you for upping that again.

I think that some of the very positive feedback was linked to the fact that you all have good voices - you sound something like more mainstream artists which was in the past reasonably rare on tr. I would get to over-excited about this track because although it is good, the lyrics are quite simple and I didn't really be like 'wow I haven't heard anything like that line before' and I feel the delivery could have been better - if I'm being critical. There were certain lines where it didn't sound perfectly on beat aswell. I think, similarly to what vettori has discussed, that you guys could make some real hot shit in a year or two when you work on the areas that could be improved. The bottom line is this is a good track for tr and its good to hear some american hiphop tracks that sound like this because I don't have access to non-mainstream us rap since I live in the uk I don't know where to find it. keep it up I am definately looking forward to hearing some more tracks - especially if any of the things I have discussed have been improved on!

[Boston]

thanks a lot mc.

i really really appreciate everything you said but the only thing i really don't agree with is i dont think it will take ME 1-2 years to get reallllly good. i mean im just confident that on my own, i can improve drastically. the lyrics i explained, i wrote it quickly before i got into the studio, i was rushed to write it hah so at points the flow is going to be hmm.. not the BEST. well it might sound off beat a few times, but im taking in all your advice, it is very appreciated. thanks a lot

anyone else ?

[randomghost]

hot flow ...nice lyrics...am feelin the track....good job lookin forward to hear more stuff from ya