8 Bars

[Emadyville]

Just looking for feedback. Seeing if you think this is good to spit as a feature on a track?

You want bars here I go let’s list-eight,
Look at me smile as I look at a pissed-face,
No mistakes on the verse and at this-rate,
My disc-makes you think twice and distaste,
Whatevers not me on anybody’s mixtape,
For Christ-sake I think it’s time to switch-hate,
Which-fate is mine well I never missed-great,
So any disgrace must mean your minds misplaced.

[<Stiiccy>]

hmmm this would sound a hell of alot better if it was recorded and you put a real sharp angry delivery
flowed nice and i love the word play...

you gotta record some of this shit dude

[Emadyville]

hmmm this would sound a hell of alot better if it was recorded and you put a real sharp angry delivery
flowed nice and i love the word play...

you gotta record some of this shit dude

I know, I'm thinking i'll have some shit in like 2 weeks.