New song.. Party Out

[soperman005]

I made the beat and I do the 2nd and 4th verse. Its a pretty fun song and i"d like to hear some feedback. Its on my friends profile so go check it out i'll try to get it up on zhsare before too long



http://www.myspace.com/thewhiteboy916

[Boston]

to be honest i dont like the song that much, im not saying its bad its just not appealing to me. flow seems to be on point. quality can be somewhat better, no complaints about the lyrics. delivery is straight ha. overall its straight

feed my new song Make It if you dont mind, thanks

[enjinn]

its a cool song...i was feeling each verse...good shit

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

the scratchin at the beginning was a kool add and hook
1st verse: flow was pretty okay....delievery was good...
2nd verse: sounds a bit boring....doesnt catch me
3rd verse: sounds more catching again...kool flow again
pretty good track,,the melody pattern is pretty repetive and short...some adds or longer pattern would work better

[DelinQuent]

bill nye was the real science guy LMFAO

flow was nice in the first and 3rd verses. delivery was also good, lyrics were funny.

second verse was a little boring, but the rhymes had me laughing, good shit.

overall, concept is whack but you pulled it off well and made it into a decent song thats worth hearing.

[soperman005]

ite no ones said shit bout the 4th verse.. haha

[<Stiiccy>]

yo i really liked this shit haha
nice white boy touch...to a not so white boy song hahahahaha

flow was real nice on every verse..
lyrics were average...
but everything turned out nice

keep it up
i look forward to hearing more of you

[soperman005]

thanks a lot man i appreciate it