here is the link:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/19986014269e21c5/
feed is appreciated....


and ohh Big AXD send me that beat u sended me before for ma album coz it got deleted...thanks...

thanx chris..appreciated°[~CHR!$~]° wrote:2nd verse started out very good...![]()
hook was okay...other verses were okay....
okay song..nuttin mind blowing but still good effort u put into this
thanx for the feed broSpeech wrote:a lil too much reverb on the verses
but a nice story yo..nothing special but its nice listening to...concept is cool man
hook could have been catchier but its ok
keep that up
thanx bostonBoston wrote:i have no real big problems against this song
i agree with speech, the concept/story makes it interesting to listen to ha
and it seems to me a lot of people here has a problem with hooks lol
like chris said the 2nd verse started off good. you could tell you put effort into it
good luck with your album bro
feed my make it track please
Dr.Dre wrote:Hell Yeah
thanx bro..much appreciatedDelinQuent wrote:i liked the chorus
verses were solid, flow and rhymes were all decent.
overall a good song, i enjoyed it
na i didnt do the beat....its some producer i forgot his name...thanx x..appreciatedBig Ax-D wrote:DAYYMNN, the beat is amazing!! you made it??
the story is great hahaha, loving it
the flow and quality is![]()
DAMN, EXCELENT STORYTELLING hahaha
word, loving this one hahaha...![]()
ama send the beat asap
thanx man..appreciatedenjinn wrote:nice story telling...interesting track
sticcy z wrote:lose the accent and you can be somthing
lmao damn man dont be stupid, its something u have from when ur born yes u can change it a bit but u'll never lose it
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