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NEW - Hit Em' Up 3

Postby Solace » Oct 4th, '08, 22:31

Yea :smoking:

First off, fuck your trash talk, its useless,
cause you know ill come harder cause im ruthless,
my rhymes are like a knife, and your getting stabbed,
wife says shes doing late shifts *pft* shes gettin nabbed,
grabbed and touched everywhere on the body,
and you told me you were the playa, this hoe so naughty,
in fact i fucked her last week, dont blame me
it was the couple glasses of Bacardi,
same thing with ya mama, you said you fucked mine,
well look at the karma, and man was she fine,
oh did that hurt, you gunna run up to me?
attack me, really i suggest you suck up to me,
cause my life is a waste, so i dont care if im wasted,
cause ill die happily, if im placed among the greatest,
while your down there, acting like some OG,
acting so tough, i think you got a thing for Kobe,
cause no one wants your sex, you must be lonely,
walking up to strangers telling them "Yo, Phone Me",
Your a fucking loser so just stop that shit,
before I come at you and cut off ya clit,
so grab Beretta's, have a vendetta,
you cant say shit about me cause you know im better,
--Ayo fuck this. I just ripped your fucking heart out. Get a fucking life. Yo....I'm out.
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Re: NEW - Hit Em' Up 3 (UNDONE)

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 4th, '08, 22:46

haha, pretty sick.
had a couple really funny punchlines in it.

begining threw me off at first 'cause how Em said it too, but that's sick, lol.

good work
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Re: NEW - Hit Em' Up 3 (UNDONE)

Postby Solace » Oct 4th, '08, 22:56

Thanks man for checking it. Yeah like heres Tupacs first sentence:
First off fuck your bitch and the clique you claim

Then Eminem
First off fuck your songs and the shit you say


I thought i might continue you "first off, fuck your" lol.

Hopefully its gunna be sick when its completed.
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Re: NEW - Hit Em' Up 3

Postby Solace » Oct 5th, '08, 15:48

Bump. Finished it yesterday.
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Re: NEW - Hit Em' Up 3

Postby Requiem » Oct 5th, '08, 19:42

had some pretty good lines in it. i might even do hit em up 4 :o
not ur best, but definitely a welcome addition. i mean, practice makes perfect. :y: and i seen u been practicing alot lately, so it's only a matter of time till u've mastered ur style
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Re: NEW - Hit Em' Up 3

Postby mcZu » Oct 5th, '08, 19:51

Not bad, flows nice :y:
lyrics were not bad :y:
Nice piece man :b:
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Re: NEW - Hit Em' Up 3

Postby Solace » Oct 5th, '08, 19:54

IceKilla wrote:had some pretty good lines in it. i might even do hit em up 4 :o
not ur best, but definitely a welcome addition. i mean, practice makes perfect. :y: and i seen u been practicing alot lately, so it's only a matter of time till u've mastered ur style

Thanks man. We could make an entire mixtape using old songs as starters :p
mcZu wrote:Not bad, flows nice :y:
lyrics were not bad :y:
Nice piece man :b:


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