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I Ask Myself

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I Ask Myself

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 7th, '08, 13:32

i ask myself a lot why was i brought here
but unclear are my thoughts as i steer
have i forgot all those years i've lost to disappear
cuz what i want is just your ears
and i won't stop until i'm where
that spot's at, am i near?
or am i not, i'll watch it, there's some fear
i have fought off and plus i swear
i'm tough, self taught and well prepared
to go soft's no idea
i've got to switch up a gear
so something must be shared before i rot my career
now feel the power, from the pain i've encountered
how real's my tears that i shower, are my problems still mirrored?
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: I Ask Myself

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 7th, '08, 19:20

one never knows what to expect with yur style thanks for keeping me on my toes...
good drop man :y:
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Re: I Ask Myself

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 7th, '08, 20:58

Nice drop man.
Not your best, but it was good. Like Rain Matrix said, you got a wide-variety of styles, so I'm always lookin' forward to checkin' what you got for us, haha.

Keep it up bro.
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Re: I Ask Myself

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 8th, '08, 00:31

:worship: thanx guys, im very happy to hear that, you guys keep it up too, i'm always reading your drops! :coffee:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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