The Future uhoh - $ticcy Z

[<Stiiccy>]

ahh the annual Political song

well this is mine...

The future UHOH!!

http://www.zshare.net/audio/20115008543cfa1b/

or

http://www.myspace.com/sticcyz08

please don't comment on my views...i dont want this turn into a thread about the presidential shit...

please feed the music..

[Emadyville]

Ummmmm goddamn. I'm not going to lie, I agreed with the whole song. I like how you said what you did about obama but said you're not supporting either candidate. That's kind of ballsy to do ya know what I mean. But on the song for real, rhymes in the beginning were sick, flow there too, beat went well with it, your voice in the beginning was out of left field from what i'm used to hearing but was a good intro. I thought this was a great political track, you kept it real. Hook was tight, rhymed well and fit the song. I thought overall you rhymed really well, this song and the past one you really stepped it up in that category. I really don't have a complaint about this one, you straight killed it. 10/10.

[gladimnotsoluble]

Without talking politics, this song was alright, maybe a 7/10.

The reason is, you had good rhymes, nice beat, good hook, but you were TOO hard. You were a little too angry, too rough, it just got kinda bad for the ears. There were times when your words were pretty unclear.

However that's just the bad stuff, just so you can know you need to improve on clarity and maybe tone it down a notch, on the good side this was definitely a dope song, you had some sweet lyrics and it was an overall good track

nice job man

[Tash8]

mixing/quality was pretty bad, but flow was cool, lyrics were decent... hook was pretty bad...

i wont comment on some of the comments u said about obama that were unjustified but it was pretty cool...

ur improving, finally controlling ur voice a lot better

keep it up.

[<Stiiccy>]

@ emady, thanks a bunch man...im really glad your paying attention to my music enough to tell ive stepped it up

@ gladimnotsoluble, thanks man...my style is very angry and raw...thats just me..

@ tash, hey man everone has there opinions...and i respect yours...but on the mixing..could you point out what was bad?...im trying to become a better mixer...

[Tash8]

@ tash, hey man everone has there opinions...and i respect yours...but on the mixing..could you point out what was bad?...im trying to become a better mixer...

well, first of all, it didnt seem that the acapella and beat were mixed together but rather just put on top of each other.. plus there were a lot of pops in the acapella and a few clicks here and there.. and did you put flanger on the acapella? and in the hook, it was panned to the left, you should keep it center, otherwise it'll sound weird like it does now. i liked the overlays though, i just felt that the whole verse pella is too wide, a verse's acapella is usually real tight while the hook is wide, and it was the opposite on this song, which was weird, but maybe others will like i just didn't...

P.S. 3rd verse sounds great mixing wise, should have used that throughout the song. imo.

[<Stiiccy>]

@ tash, hey man everone has there opinions...and i respect yours...but on the mixing..could you point out what was bad?...im trying to become a better mixer...

well, first of all, it didnt seem that the acapella and beat were mixed together but rather just put on top of each other.. plus there were a lot of pops in the acapella and a few clicks here and there.. and did you put flanger on the acapella? and in the hook, it was panned to the left, you should keep it center, otherwise it'll sound weird like it does now. i liked the overlays though, i just felt that the whole verse pella is too wide, a verse's acapella is usually real tight while the hook is wide, and it was the opposite on this song, which was weird, but maybe others will like i just didn't...

P.S. 3rd verse sounds great mixing wise, should have used that throughout the song. imo.

iight man...
well look on the bright side at least it sounds better than half this board haha

[Speech]

yeah i like the way you use your voice here...good shit...as for the lyrics...politics in usa...not my businezz but if can anuhow help obama to win..i do that haha
chorus was performed a lil too extreme i think...you should have recorded it twice or even 3 times...so that pushes the delivery but doesn sound over-done
i liked the song..mixin could be better i guess what tash said will do the job
keep it comin yo

[Robbie G]

DOPE DOPE DOPE

i LOVED IT.

[Steve Spag]

Pretty dope dude.
Liked the word-play for it, flow was cool but I felt it could have been better.
Your voice kinda fades in and out at parts, but other than that it's pretty nice.

Keep it up man.

[<VerbalTouch>]

mixing/quality was pretty bad, but flow was cool, lyrics were decent... hook was pretty bad...

i wont comment on some of the comments u said about obama that were unjustified but it was pretty cool...

ur improving, finally controlling ur voice a lot better

keep it up.

agree on tis but i out of all your music i like this the best had a really good flow on this but i would like to see it remixed better with more dubs and stuff.

[<Stiiccy>]

thanks to everyone...
you guys are the shit f-real

[Solace]

Nice beat, good lyrics, excellent delivery. But yes as gladimsnotsoluble said, very rough, kinda ruined it a bit. I liked the hook, but it wasnt catchy but still good.

8/10, good job

[Tash8]

8/10, good job

What the fuck is with this 8/10, 10/10, 6/10 shit? In reality, I rate rate White America, Superman, a 8/10... now if we're going by that sequence then this is -5/10 from those songs.... Rate them on their improvement of previous songs maybe, but not much else

[<Stiiccy>]

8/10, good job

What the fuck is with this 8/10, 10/10, 6/10 shit? In reality, I rate rate White America, Superman, a 8/10... now if we're going by that sequence then this is -5/10 from those songs.... Rate them on their improvement of previous songs maybe, but not much else

well tash then why dont you make your own ratings system...
i rarely get love on this board...and now that i do your bitching.
good god wat is wrong with people