New Song

[seh]

I'm new to the trshady family and I thought I'd post a song. This song is from 2006 at some point but I just found it and thought i'd post it, its called Lucifer.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/2023027395ec1ca8/

Verse 1:
Perform a stage dive from 8 stories high
With my back towards the ground, middle finger to the sky
live life knowing if you ain't killed your slayed
so the basic motto is just live another day
have another bill to pay,
dont make it pick up your shit and skate and switch states
if the pigs get your face you switch plates
if you get away, thats when you celebrate
got hell to pay with a dime in my pocket
a knife in my sock, hoodie with mink on top it
had a pot addicition and lost it,
im trying to find it in this garcia vega i just sparked
your weed connect inconsistent as john starks
sometimes its mids sometimes its straight bark
im like a rapist waitin for ladies in the dark
im the son of lucifer, lucifer

[<VerbalTouch>]

Damn bro you got a perfect voice for this good shit hit me up sometime

[seh]

Thanks for the feedback.. I agree the lyrics are sort of elementary but its old so ya know, whatever... im going to post another song i did during the same recording session back in 06 called your eyes.

[Tash8]

nice man!

only problem imo was your quality

but like ur flow and like others said ur voice is perfect for rap.

[Emadyville]

Yeah it wasn't bad for some 06 stuff, sounded good like everyone else said, beat was crazy too.

[seh]

nice man!

only problem imo was your quality

but like ur flow and like others said ur voice is perfect for rap.

word.. quality of what though? production, lyrics.. Just want to know so I can caress the next song I make..

[enjinn]

nice beat...all in all its a good track...im feeling it...im new here too so maybe we can collab someday

[Xray]

i liked the lyrics man thought it was dope. but you didn't deliver them great. flow is there, delivery is probably alot better now since this track is 06, so for an 06 track its pretty dope

[Kez]

Wow i'm fuckin shocked

I expected something average, but this is good

Lyrics are a bit Slim Shady ish tbh but still pretty good
Flow was brilliant
Beat was sick

I'm lookin forward to hearing more from you

[°[~CHR!$~]°]

sick song man..everything was summed up so far
just can agree....u got a perfect voice....sounds so raw no homo lol
lyrics could be more complex but did their job in my opinion
and flow was great....actually like kez...im very suprised..excepted somthin average
but it was a very decent verse

[Speech]

great lyrics
great flow
not so great delivery..i hope you improved cuz the delivery is something you really needa work on, if not

keep it up tho you have some big ass potential yo

[B.A.D.]

you remind me a lot Of Project Deadman, same style, same voice, same flow (thats a good thing, just so you know)

lyrics are basic but does the job really well

defo gonna be lookin forward to youre stuff

[seh]

appreciate all the positive feedback and constructive criticism.. my producer/ engineer (ilus) is away until the 20th or so, so no brand spanking new 08 shit for a minute, but I have a couple more oldies from the vault you guys may appreciate that I'll be posting over the next few days. and yeah, im trying to get better so keep the criticism coming and watch out for ilustrious productions in 09 and beyond!!