I'm The Shit-Untouchablez

[DelinQuent]

Second dude was alright he wasnt saying nothing really.... he lyrics where basic.

multis-and i am EMS/
yes i am me a mess, scatter brained battle trained/
battle me that'll be, catastophy i casually/
eat you up like calories, steadier than salaries/
out this world and galaxy, this is not a fallacy/
the question that you askin me

multiple syllable rhymes... check.

metaphor... check out the end of the verse, i talk as if im the shit as in top dog, dont fuck with me, but it could also be me talking as if i literally was poop.

push ya assholes im the shit/
so you dont wanna touch me, cause i can make it ugly/
ucky disgusting, ya cant eat the shit/

it'll leave you diseased, and cant fuck with the shit/
it'll give you faggots aids,

poop pushes on your asshole when it needs to come out, you dont wanna touch poop, makes things dirty. eat it and you will get sick. and the gay community has a very high aids percentage

im not replying to argue, just pointing out what you missed .

again, thanks for listening and thanks for your feedback

EDIT-more multies
i'm a beast on these beats, enemies scared of me/
better think carefully, or i will have yo head/
and im talkin bout yo bitch, if you talkin out yo jaw/
then im talkin thru my fists, fists talkin to ya lips/
lips talkin to the feds, feds talk a lotta shit/
but they had no evidence, evidently im the shit/
come intensly when i spit, dont tempt me i will hit/
not friendly when commenting on this state of the game/

no offense, but are you aware of what multies are?

[KDEWolf]

Best way to get on the radio is to make some shit that nobody else is doing that is also catchy

lol sure thing man...Weezy is different?, Fat joe is different?, Plies is different?, Kayne is different?, T.I. is different?...all of those guys are not different bud...

you get on the radio by sucking dick metaphorically basically

Kanye came on some new shit. Weezy is one of the most metaphoric rappers out their even though i hate him. Plies and Fat Joe are garbage.

If you want an example of a person making their own lane look at Lupe Fiasco..... Who sounds like Lupe? Nobody prior to him coming out. Lupe came on his own shit... He didnt make songs for the club and didnt make songs for chicks. He came on some skate board shit and sold millions of records.... And Look at where he is now....

Second dude was alright he wasnt saying nothing really.... he lyrics where basic.

multis-and i am EMS/
yes i am me a mess, scatter brained battle trained/
battle me that'll be, catastophy i casually/
eat you up like calories, steadier than salaries/
out this world and galaxy, this is not a fallacy/
the question that you askin me

multiple syllable rhymes... check.

metaphor... check out the end of the verse, i talk as if im the shit as in top dog, dont fuck with me, but it could also be me talking as if i literally was poop.

push ya assholes im the shit/
so you dont wanna touch me, cause i can make it ugly/
ucky disgusting, ya cant eat the shit/

it'll leave you diseased, and cant fuck with the shit/
it'll give you faggots aids,

poop pushes on your asshole when it needs to come out, you dont wanna touch poop, makes things dirty. eat it and you will get sick. and the gay community has a very high aids percentage

im not replying to argue, just pointing out what you missed .

again, thanks for listening and thanks for your feedback

Im just saying you missed those aspects of lycicism on the majority of the song im not saying you didnt have any. And i like the song i think you got your point across you had some great ryhmes going at the beggining

[Tash8]

Best way to get on the radio is to make some shit that nobody else is doing that is also catchy

lol sure thing man...Weezy is different?, Fat joe is different?, Plies is different?, Kayne is different?, T.I. is different?...all of those guys are not different bud...

you get on the radio by sucking dick metaphorically basically

no one, no one in the industry sounds anything like weezy, kanye's style is unique as fuck, t.i. his lyrics are different than anyone else, the way he says things is different, and who cares about the other 2, they both trash.

[DelinQuent]

well KDE thanks again for the feed and i'm glad you didnt see me as trying to argue

feed me tash! lmfao

[<Stiiccy>]

no one, no one in the industry sounds anything like weezy, kanye's style is unique as fuck, t.i. his lyrics are different than anyone else, the way he says things is different, and who cares about the other 2, they both trash.

all of them = shit

[Tash8]

no one, no one in the industry sounds anything like weezy, kanye's style is unique as fuck, t.i. his lyrics are different than anyone else, the way he says things is different, and who cares about the other 2, they both trash.

all of them = shit

not the point...

[<Stiiccy>]

no one, no one in the industry sounds anything like weezy, kanye's style is unique as fuck, t.i. his lyrics are different than anyone else, the way he says things is different, and who cares about the other 2, they both trash.

all of them = shit

not the point...

does it really matter at this point?...em's commin back imma shut the hell up lol

[Call Me Pik]

my style is i dont give a fuck about styles....every verse i spit im not trying to contain my image im trying to sell you my verse/song...if you thought the track or the verse was hott ..i did my job of conveying the message that i felt.was important enough for me to spit about...whether u heard it b4 or not isnt my issue...i believe an artist isnt being about...the crazyiest wordplay...the hottest multis ...or the coolest sounding vocoder ...alot of times i feel like there just limitations of ppls creativity......for example .....once u listen to 3 of twistas songs...your gonna label his style as "a fast rapper" so thats whut heez about...imagine hearing twista not rap fast and rap normal speed hmmm crazy to even think about huh...or when u listen to wayne you say..heez a metaphorical / similie rapper thats whut heez about.....whut if lil wayne made a track rapping with biggies style.....who is to say he cant do it..you because you havent heard it????.....kanye is my nigga ..kuz he is starting to get being the same isnt what ppl are really interested in and its not what will make them listen ...if you woulda asked me b4 if i could see kanye singing something that sounds kinda old fashion i woulda laughed in your face...but really who doesnt like love lockdown?...it doesnt matter if you dont kuz its still very creative nontheless..if a rapper changes there style of rap every song ....changes his delivery every song .....yall still would say to that rapper i like ur style or i dont like ur style so in the end just listen to the song n let us know if u liked the song or not

[Speech]

Best way to get on the radio is to make some shit that nobody else is doing that is also catchy

lol sure thing man...Weezy is different?, Fat joe is different?, Plies is different?, Kayne is different?, T.I. is different?...all of those guys are not different bud...

you get on the radio by sucking dick metaphorically basically

well the ppl you named are different in flow, voice and style....sure they all talk about money but all rappers do in some way even if its about dreaming of having money...the ppl you named are different just that they know what to say on audio to please the listeners

btw i'ma feed this soon

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comes up everytime i try to download, i can't listen to it either...

[Xray]

Best way to get on the radio is to make some shit that nobody else is doing that is also catchy

lol sure thing man...Weezy is different?, Fat joe is different?, Plies is different?, Kayne is different?, T.I. is different?...all of those guys are not different bud...

you get on the radio by sucking dick metaphorically basically

well the ppl you named are different in flow, voice and style....sure they all talk about money but all rappers do in some way even if its about dreaming of having money...the ppl you named are different just that they know what to say on audio to please the listeners

damn your brain washed too? man don't be believing this "they know what to say on audio to please the listeners" that's all bullshit. these dudes might have talent but there talent is garbage compared to real talent. every beat kanye's produced for jay z is one wack ass beat. every kanye verse is a wack verse. fat joe only has respect because of "big pun". weezy has no talent what so ever. his like a cheerleader in the rap game, all show. gets fucked here and there by other rappers. than gets back on show and is like "im the illest". T.I is the only one that i got respect for out of that list. because he writes his own shit and has always stayed the same, and can write some dope shit if he wants to. these other motherfuckers are nothing. rappers with disabilities always make excuses "i know what my listeners want to hear" if your listeners are homos and your making them happy than your a homo to. tired of this "radio" shit.

[Speech]

lol man sajjad bein pissed about something thatz goin on in the industry for years now...why am i brain washed, when i said that THOSE ppl know what the listeners wanna hear..did i say that i rap about bitches and party all day? did i say that its what I WANNA HEAR?! nah so your brain washing comment was imprudent talkin and a product of unnessecary negative energy lol

lil wayne sucks, fat joe sucks...kanye west sucks....but you still read the comments on the internet
"weezy is my fav., kanye is my fav." ...and some are even listening to jmt and stuff....i like to listen to a wack ass wayne verse after 10 hours of hard rakim style lyrics, just because theres time to relax....if there was a radio station in germany, ONLY playing underground hip hop, i'd love that but i guess there will never be such station...
again i am not brain washed i still say UNDERGROUND > POP HOP
its a fact that simple wack music is loved by the society...ppl like you and me, we different..maybe we are the brain washed cuz of the hate we built against simple music...never know...are we the weirdos?
think about it

[DelinQuent]

THIS SONG DOESNT EVEN SOUND LIKE A RADIO SONG

for fucks sake can we get back to giving feedback? lmfao

[Call Me Pik]

lmao yeah thatd be nice ....oh an by the way next songs a rock song so keep hatin lmao ..uppin..

[Emadyville]

THIS SONG DOESNT EVEN SOUND LIKE A RADIO SONG

for fucks sake can we get back to giving feedback? lmfao

I was thinking the same thing. Let me add to my feedback if I may on the point you just made. I forget to mention how it was great how you talked about people saying you sound like radio songs, and then you made the song sound a lot more underground, or something that wouldn't be on the radio. I think that was key how everything you expressed in the beginning was shown in the content of the song.

[<VerbalTouch>]

Added by AspirinE

Bumping threads- No one is obliged to feed you, it is of the persons will to comment, if you aren't getting responses, while you clearly get the views, take a hint(being blunt). Its understandable that sometimes when theres a lot of posting in the current section you want to refresh your topic, do so with a maximum of one new post, saying "bump" two times in a row is just clearly attention seeking.

Theres no rule saying that you have to feed so we dont need to