you'll see my face when you scream!!

[ilovemeghan]

loooooooool found this verse i made for my ex, who cheated on me. reading it now is :| wow. chilling i think. we're mates now. lol.

HAAAAA!
Now do you see!? [Girl screams]
I’m tattooed in your brain you’ll see my face when you scream!
You’ll cry yourself to sleep then you’ll see my face when you dream! (Help me!)
You can’t turn around!
You can’t jump and you can’t shout
You can’t run, and you can’t hide!
My name is the name you’re gonna be screaming when you cry! [Scoootttt!]
It’s insane, you’re going crazy, you’re bawling like a baby (you’re tainted!)
You can’t take it! Your heartbeat is racing, whilst you walk around you’re pacing
You talk about our breaking, you’ve thought about us lately (uh huh)
So when you reminisce, you’ll be regretting what you did (I do!)
And end up wanting another kiss (well fuck you!)
I can’t believe you; for what you ever put me through!
I never thought you’d do what you did, because that was never you! (You’re not who I loved!)
You’re demonic, you sinned, and it’s ironic
How you said you’d never cheat on me, you promised! (“I don’t need to cheat, I have you”)
I persisted to resist you from drinking
What was going through your mind? WHAT the fuck were you thinking?! (I don’t know!)
Come on you do admit, that what you did was truly sick (you fooled me bitch)
I don’t know how I duly picked, a tooly bitch who THREW me, shiiit!
FUUUCK!
I’m so glad, that my pride remains intact
You’re pride is tainted; you’ll never get it back!
One a slut always a slut hmm
You need you figure out your legs, and how to shut them, hmm (slut hmm)
You named ********** a slut (yes you did) but now it’s all gone kaput
Because now the shoe has ended up on the other foot!
Hypocritical bitch
I fucking hope you feel the words I’m hitting you with!
I know when you read this; you’ll have a knot in your stomach, a panic attack
But don’t panic, relax
I still love you very much, but I need to express my emotion
This will cause commotion, but I’m drowning under the ocean

[Emadyville]

I liked it. It was pretty cool, could kind of feel the extra emotion with what the ad libs in there. The rhymes were decent, good work

[ilovemeghan]

I liked it. It was pretty cool, could kind of feel the extra emotion with what the ad libs in there. The rhymes were decent, good work

thanks man, it gives me chills reading it now though, its at least a year old and ent read it since i wrote it.

[johnny geah]

seems like a poser. wants to be eminem and thought it would be cool to make his version of the song "kim". brilliant.

[ilovemeghan]

seems like a poser. wants to be eminem and thought it would be cool to make his version of the song "kim". brilliant.

lol wtf.. who DOESNT want to be eminem? retard.
and my version of kim? stfu ur just a hater.

[johnny geah]

i'd say most people dont want to be eminem, we just enjoy his genius. as for being a hater? i calls them like i sees them.












(fag)

[ilovemeghan]

i'd say most people dont want to be eminem, we just enjoy his genius. as for being a hater? i calls them like i sees them.












(fag)

pfft... fuck off

[JMG]

is this a guy your talkin about

[Solace]

is this a guy your talkin about

good one!

anyways, bout the verse. nice emotion, i can see how you were feeling. and yeah, its kinda twisted lol. but anyways good good

[Kez]

It's basically Kim, just call it Kieran.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

you write to much like eminem.

[Tash8]

you write to much like eminem.

don't ever compare this wackiness to eminem, dude....

just cause your name changed to green, you don't need to act like your high.

[,-,'-{Bar}-',-,]

you write to much like eminem.

don't ever compare this wackiness to eminem, dude....

just cause your name changed to green, you don't need to act like your high.

if i was high id be lmao that you used the word wackiness ....wait a minute, i am laughing

[Rain Matrix]

nice drop tha emotion was gripping to say tha least
btw in tha immortal words of 50 Cent "I'm high all tha time, I smoke that good shit"