I'm The Shit-Untouchablez

[<VerbalTouch>]

43 posts and only 4 people left feedback.

this is fucking stupid.

thanks to emadyville, sticcy, speech, and KDEwolf for actually leaving feedback.

really came down with this feed bull shit its stupid to see you getting so worked up over it its the internet have fun with this shit anddont get so emo about teh whole subjects i'll feed if you want me to if it'll make you happy.

PikPocket I loved your flow on this and the lyircs were pretty good but would remind me of something eminem would do really like

imma carbon copy utilizer
lucratively suicidal
absolutely lyrically
kamikaze unibomber
a commarady scrutinizer

Eminem:
Fubba you cubba cubba, yubba yub yubba yooba
Yooba can subbabick my dubbibbabick through a tooba
Summaladoomalama
I'm not a human I'm a supersonic neurobonic suicidal unibomber
You think I'm a nuisce, I'm impressive I'm the new Madonna
Jeffery Dahmer left me with his legacy to carry on

Not comparing you to Em i just think it sounds alike lyric wise

DelinQuent I think that you tried to match with PikPocket's flow too hard in my eyes.

But thats just my views you both did god on this but DQ I think you should of tried changing your flow a bit to give it a more spark.

[DelinQuent]

no, i should get mad. i give tons of feedback to everyone here, then i post and get a bunch of bullshit posts littered in my topic.

but anyway, thank you for your feedback.

flow wise, i wanted to change it up when we first came up with the song and i somehow completely forgot lmfao. thanks for pointing that out

[<VerbalTouch>]

I just think that your making a big deal out of the whole feed thingno ones forcing you to give feed and no ones forcing s. Like I said just calm down about it and mor epeople will do it may take some time but the will feed or you could pm some people asking them to post here. But eh.

[Kez]

With all due respect DQ, only 6 people have checked my latest track, and my threads never go past 2 pages.

You're not the only one.

[Emadyville]

I just think that your making a big deal out of the whole feed thingno ones forcing you to give feed and no ones forcing s. Like I said just calm down about it and mor epeople will do it may take some time but the will feed or you could pm some people asking them to post here. But eh.

Just shows he's serious about improving and wants serious feedback, just like I know sticcy does too, and myself, we all put so much into it, all we want is some honest feedback. Doesn't seem emo to me, seems like you're just not too bright to have figured that out imo.

[Kez]

I just think that your making a big deal out of the whole feed thingno ones forcing you to give feed and no ones forcing s. Like I said just calm down about it and mor epeople will do it may take some time but the will feed or you could pm some people asking them to post here. But eh.

Just shows he's serious about improving and wants serious feedback, just like I know sticcy does too, and myself, we all put so much into it, all we want is some honest feedback. Doesn't seem emo to me, seems like you're just not too bright to have figured that out imo.

Well i want to improve and get serious feedback, but i rarely get much.

Shall i start moaning? Nah, because then it's half-hearted feedback, people only doing it because they're made to.

[Call Me Pik]

I just think that your making a big deal out of the whole feed thingno ones forcing you to give feed and no ones forcing s. Like I said just calm down about it and mor epeople will do it may take some time but the will feed or you could pm some people asking them to post here. But eh.

Just shows he's serious about improving and wants serious feedback, just like I know sticcy does too, and myself, we all put so much into it, all we want is some honest feedback. Doesn't seem emo to me, seems like you're just not too bright to have figured that out imo.

Well i want to improve and get serious feedback, but i rarely get much.

Shall i start moaning? Nah, because then it's half-hearted feedback, people only doing it because they're made to.

the least they could do is give a 1 - 10 rating on the the song....feedback is important and ppl shouldnt just post to have a conversation in music threads

[<VerbalTouch>]

You guys arent getting the point of this forum, its to post music that we cant talk about and give feed on.

The forum for TRshady family audio songs and albums / mixtapes.

If it was like

The forum for TRshady family audio songs and albums / mixtapes you need to give feed.

Then i bet more people would feed.

[AspirinE]

Ok. First off Pockets verse was sick, but since he's not on TR I'll basically feed you DQ.

Ok first part of your verse was straight sick. Loved the ideas in there, and the rhymes at the end were sick, no question about that.

Second Verse: This part was nasty.

last dying breath, breathe breathe/
last dying breath, and i am EMS/
yes i am me a mess, scatter brained battle trained/
battle me that'll be, catastophy i casually/

This just stood out so much:

the question that you askin me, I am the answer/
2+2 is DQ, makes life simple/

And overall you killed it. There were two parts where you the word sounded like you were catching up, but other than that, the flow was great, the emotion and delivery were on point. The whole song was great and really followed the "we're the shit" concept very well. I liked how you both started fast then slowed up, and the ending of the song with you both was a great ending to it. 10/10 man, really good work.

I would add something to say, but really i 100% share the opinion above.

9/10, just coz i expect to hear a 10/10 from u someday.

[DelinQuent]

wow asp, thanks for the feedback

ps... i cant wait to heard your new shit lol

[B.A.D.]

hey DQ, I've been tryn to chek this since last week or sometin but my fuckin computer freezes on everywhere

but thank god pik posted a soundclick link so here it goes

Pik:
amazing amazing rhymes and creative stuff, flow was flawless, quality was great, the lil wayne mocking was amazing, everything, since the intro exclusive hot shit, no complains about it

DQ: on the bridge, rite where u start quality lacks a bit, maybe some frequencies weren't well handled, other than that impressive, best of you was your delivery, great shit there, killer verse. killer rhymes, nothing bad at all, giving out a 100/100 here.

great track from you 2, (I still love the love songs you make tho), but nice nice

intro = Majesty

[DelinQuent]

good lookin out ax.

glad to see you liked it.

[randomghost]

lol am usin the same beat for ma album...hot lyrics from both.....i like the coughing part from pik,...lol...hot track...mixing is the good...delivery is hot...nice shit brothers

[Call Me Pik]

thnks 4 listenin n givin feed random..lemme know when yours is out i wanna see how u use the instrumental...my fav line out the whole song would be dqs part ...i am ems ...i am me a mess

[Tornado]

lol at your long assed intro..your rhymes were Eminem ish like someone said..liked how you flowed on the beat and kinda sung to it ...and i think DQ,you struggle on 2 occasions but other than that it was really good, shit i was suprised myself..
great shit