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NEW STEVE SPAG - Lifted

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 22nd, '08, 17:24

Just wrote this peice a couple days ago. I'm really feelin' the way it flows to the beat, so I'm probably gonna end up recording this. The beat is called "Memory Lane" by Shadowville, a really old beat though. It's got a nice sample at the begining of the verse saying "Let me take you back..." first thing I thought of was my first time getting high, lol. As far as the lyrics go, it's nothing too complex, but I tried to keep the same rhyme-scheme all the way through. Anyways, check it out and let me know what ya' think. Chet, you should like this, haha.

let me take you back..
to when i had my first hit, of that marajuinna cigarette//
i got lit once it got lit//
i felt lifted, i was tottally ripped//
it was behind seneca park, just me and some friends//
we did a bit of chillin' then we finally dipped//
and i was dreamin' 'bout chicken and chips//
i must admit that i liked that spliff//
you know it might have been the cause of all of this//
and ever since that day, i've been addicted//
but strictly to this shit, i'll always be trippin'//
there's no need to sniff shit, i don't wanna risk it//
'cause it takes me an instant to go places i'm thinkin'//
and now i just want a drink and//
some visine for my blinkin' because my eyes are soo pink//
yeah, you know the product is sick//
it looks soo sticky and green, i've got to save some this week//

Copywright: Steven Spagnuolo 2008

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Lifted

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 22nd, '08, 18:57

Gotta love that good green herb :smoking:
Good drop man
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Lifted

Postby Solace » Oct 22nd, '08, 21:45

That was good, lyrically not as good as other songs but decent, and yeah what chet said, even tho your talking about drugs, you said it in a chill good way not like "Ima g i drink and smoke weed"

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Lifted

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 23rd, '08, 00:49

Chet Starr wrote::worship: I love it

A clever song about smoking weed. Most songs are just plain up smoking, but you tell a story in it.

You should make each verse about some memory. 1st time you smoked, 1st time you rapped

Good idea man, thanks a lot. Much respect.

Thanks for all the feed guys, really appreciated.

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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Lifted

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 23rd, '08, 04:14

nah, i can go on thru my day without hearing this song
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: NEW STEVE SPAG - Lifted

Postby Tash8 » Oct 23rd, '08, 06:32

I agree with shit

a song called like "Memory Lane"
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