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Tha holy war in my head

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Tha holy war in my head

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 23rd, '08, 20:43

I'm a Lyrical Threat dropping Miracle Text, satan pushes for my Spiritual Death
my piercing lines Spear This Foes Head, this might be my Clearest Flow Yet

I grab his Two Horns and spank him like a Newborn, Coochie Coochie Coo
yur Truly Stupid Dude, don't u know this man often Chooses Ruthless Crew

so bring on all yur Stupid Useless Moves, if u escape I'll Get Ya Later
nobody's gonna Miss A Hater so I Grip Tha Razor and Slice Him

only to continue Dicing and Writing about it on these Forums
shredding his Forked Toungue like I'm form new York Son

u ain't Sinister yur a Finished Work, u want tha world so I'll bury u In It's Dirt
it's good an evil and Sin Is Worse, oh great deciever can u Mimic Merc'd

u Can Now, tell yur demons Man Down! I'll ice um as they Fan Out
hell is but a Campground, I never planned on staying u Damn Clown
I Stand Proud knowing if u try me my gun will make a BANG sound!
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Re: Tha holy war in my head

Postby The GameKeeper » Oct 23rd, '08, 20:47

Dope... very dope...
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Re: Tha holy war in my head

Postby Steve Spag » Oct 23rd, '08, 22:56

One of your best drops easily. Soo dope on soo many different levels. I always look forward to reading your shit, your multie's are just simple amazing at times. The flow is pretty sick for it aswell and the topic is perfect. Overall I tought it was very cleverly written.

Keep it up bro!
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Re: Tha holy war in my head

Postby Rain Matrix » Oct 24th, '08, 01:31

thanks a lot I sat down and keystyled this because I was bored and it came out well
I appreciate tha feedback...

to all tha young artists and MC's I offer this advice "write like u mean it"
I know it sounds simple and that's because it is, just let tha stresses of this world go :smoking:
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Re: Tha holy war in my head

Postby Ka0t1c » Oct 24th, '08, 05:08

u want tha world so I'll bury u In It's Dirt


thats the best part on this piece
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Tha holy war in my head

Postby Arabian Shady » Oct 25th, '08, 10:08

i think the whole verse is ill
wiked shit bro, the flo was mean man, and i can just imagine the delivery(if recorded) lol
sick stuff bro
nice to hear some solid shit from you :worship:
Peace :b:
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50 years & going straight, Yet this performance aint worth your time,OUR
Shit is BACKSTAGE,Cause the front page aint worth Kashmir and Palestine.
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