close my eyes

[Ka0t1c]

i close my eyes and focus hard inside my mind
then i roam the dark to find my open heart in order for the binds to pull apart
so i can write my golden art
cuz i know some time i'm gonna start showin signs that i'm growin smart

there's no declines, i'll own the charts
i will climb from goals i've marked cuz only life's untold, now hark
this story's mine, unrolled to spark from my soul now sharp
like a thorn, my scars have formed these bars

so i'm reborn to march to the doors they guard to scorch their yard
moving forth to barge fully charged cuz the rewards are large
my force will carve like a sword new stars to soar and par-
don wars we've armed up for ajar like a car- door, restorin charm

alarm them more, report your part

[Steve Spag]

Meh, you've deffinetly dropped better shit. Not really feelin' this one, but the last part of it was pretty decent.

Keep it up man.

[Ka0t1c]

alright, i wrote the first 6 lines awhile back ago and saved it on here so then i went back to look at it and came up with this today...

at least you liked some of it i guess

[Rain Matrix]

I liked it I think it got a little choppy but has potential... nice rhymes scheme

[Ka0t1c]

i fixed it up Rain, maybe that will help it work right