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Quick Diss Towards a Prick

Postby shadypelkey » Nov 27th, '05, 00:47

cocky cock suckers only deserve what's worse
I can't take that back bitch, write your best verse
rap ain't your best tactic, you made out once
bitch look past it pass it, wait oh shit, what?
you too vag to smoke that good shit, just look on how you took it, book it....
"I'm an athlete no one, can pass me, man I just need to stay healthy"
rap me bitch come slap me, happy? mother fucker
I called you an athlete, anyways knowing you ain't gon'sho
no sign cause you got no flow, quit tryin to lie to get by all the time
you ain't bout shit bitch, only thing your worth is man handlin your good stick
come on you prick, I ain't gon quit till your drop dead
beside an ugly chic cause it seems to me thats all you can get wit

~E.T.H.A.N.I.C.E~

p.s. I got this recorded but I dunno how to send it through :readguidelines:
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Postby xariuss » Nov 27th, '05, 01:30

http://www.yousendit.com/ go there and upload it.. just type ur email in both the locations, then when finished uploading a LINK will come up, and paste the link in the forums
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Postby shadypelkey » Nov 28th, '05, 00:43

k here it is, but just remmeber i dun have a studio or anything so its really bad quality lol take it easy on me

http://s65.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=09E1 ... JMSKJOPIJM
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Postby Trigger » Nov 28th, '05, 04:48

after me and my studio buddies listed to it, we have come to the decison that ur goin no where keep ur day job...u suk, now dont take this the wrong way or ne thing just ur shit, doest make sence pce yo!!
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Postby Vettori » Nov 29th, '05, 00:16

HAHAHHAHA, Laugh My MUTHER FUCKIN ASS OFF, Well Yu and ur "studio Buddies" enjoy Whatever the fuck best You do in ur "Studio" HAHAHA , He's makin an effort more progress and Makes more sense then ur fake ass, LMFAO.....Keep tryin..I give ya credit
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Postby Vettori » Nov 29th, '05, 00:23

Soon enuff "Hun" :p ,
But yo, im out for now, ill ttyl,

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