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'Obamination"

Postby Robbie G » Nov 1st, '08, 21:42

Couldn't help myself. :smoking:

This is a song that I've been working on trying to get a good recording down. Already gone through about 30 runs and can't seem to get the flow down..any feed would be appreciated. Oh and I know Parts of this are an over exaggerating.

I'm using this beat from Tomega:
http://www.zshare.net/audio/507540631b48e998/

Kinda feel like it fits the song and the beat drops off for the last line, which sounds dope imo :smoking:




times are getting desperate cuz now were facin'
the collapse of a country, an "Obamination"
I don't understand the peoples fascination
like he's selling us weed that's laced-in
cocaine and it's getting our hearts racin'
false anti war,he wants are troops stationed
all over the middle east, a Pakistan invasion
Just stop lying,because it's my time your waistin'
why is it that Bill Ayers and reverend wright you're embracin?
I sit back with my pen but just keep erasin'
how to let you know its just a dream that he's chasin'
but we'll stay on this path until the countries a wastelan'...


*Clip of Obama*
"I believe that we need to spread around the wealth. To make it fair for everybody"

he want's to spread around the wealth
and give us all socialized shitty health
It's just the beginning of the new world order
a place were were abortions can be made to order
lose our borders, join the global government
Marx is laughing in his grave, cuz man he's loving it
defy the constitution, and our right to guns
And this is the world were leaving for our sons?
Obama is the messiah, but he is followed by terrorism
if it's terror he wants than it's terror we'll give him
break down the doors of the whitehouse and set it on fire
this is because Pelosi's a nazi, and Obama's a liar
don't get me wrong, I don't think mcCain is the answer
but our obama would fights capitalism like it's cancer
now ask yourself this question, is this what you want
I life controlled by the government, and a dying aunt
so I challenge you all to set forth
and keep our country Free on November 4th......
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Re: 'Obamination"

Postby JMG » Nov 1st, '08, 22:22

do u hate obama cuz hes black
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Re: 'Obamination"

Postby Ice_Scarred » Nov 2nd, '08, 03:36

That rhyme scheme was sick. You expressed your opinions through your lyrics, and you did an excellent job with it. Even though I do not agree with your opinion, no doubt you did a great job.
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Re: 'Obamination"

Postby Robbie G » Nov 2nd, '08, 04:31

Chet Starr wrote:lyrics are really good man, see nothing wrong

just don't be surprised if I don't listen to the finished project, no hate lol :smoking:


Nah, you will. :smoking:

@ Maybe. Yeah It's kind of misleading but he made comments about going into Pakistan to find Bin laden which could cause tension.

I don't hate Obama as much as this song comes off as, but total diss makes for a better song. :smoking:

@Ice thanks for checking man
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Re: 'Obamination"

Postby Darkblade44431 » Nov 5th, '08, 01:23

really nice work. :y:
great political song.
And, this line :
the collapse of a country, an "Obamination"
------- So dope ! keep it up, man.
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Re: 'Obamination"

Postby theJFKshow » Nov 5th, '08, 01:36

JMG wrote:do u hate obama cuz hes black

No, but that's the only reason why black people do like him.
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Re: 'Obamination"

Postby The Toy Soldier » Nov 7th, '08, 04:36

slimthps wrote:
JMG wrote:do u hate obama cuz hes black

No, but that's the only reason why black people do like him.

no shit cuz its a dream come true duhhr duhhr duhhr


Flows good lyrics good rhymes good but i COMPLETELTY disagree with a shit load of what you said.
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Re: 'Obamination"

Postby Urban Punk » Nov 7th, '08, 17:01

Under no circumstance do I agree with what you’ve said, though I think it’s a nice piece
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Re: 'Obamination"

Postby Xray » Nov 7th, '08, 17:05

Shady Babie > rest of G-unit :worship:

sick shit man, liked it. :smoking:
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