"Barack The Vote" New Track

[Call Me Pik]

http://www.myspace.com/pikpocket

i'll get the lyrics up for u in a lil theres a lot of double meaning in this so pay close attention
lemme get some input n feedback

[DelinQuent]

first off, hated this fucking beat.

the autotune was random and i didnt like it lol it sounded decent on the rhymes tho.

i know the lyrics and the double meaning and the lyrics are fucking fire. rhyming is dope, flow is also sick.

overall i like it, but i wont listen much cause of the beat.

EDIT-and i recommed you feed other people if you expect to get any responses other than mine lmfao

[Call Me Pik]

pocket talkin bout some change (money)
baracka talkin bout some change (difference)
pocket talkin bout some bills (money)
baracka talking bout some bills (laws)
if pocket talk a bout the cane (drugs)
baracka talk a bout mccain
if imma cut our tacky niggaz (cut our taxes)
baracka prolly do the same
found ways to get to presidents (money)
and now he wants the presidence
i run with a camp in pain (campaign)
and now the woman is irrelevant (exgirlfriend/clinton)
im feelin so damn delicate /(delegate)
its all about the us /(U.S.)
but i will not comback /(Combat)
though they will terror us (family/Terrorist)
but ne ways in many ways
this niggas jus like me
fighting for the capital (money)
watch my tongue is in disease
watch him ..watch in
tongue is in disease
fighting for the capital
in washing tongue de zee (washington dc)
hahahaaaaa
muh fuckim........pshyco
3 hun dirtbillion here
4 hun dirt billion there
just for us to go to war
i mean for us to go to where?
300 million scared
300 million wear ee
bout the situation happenin in amerrrrr
ica
ca cause they dont understand
ca cause they cant comprehend
why this havoc happened
under the government
under the bush administration
whuts obama gonna do
better stick to his words
like gum up on his shoe
kuz if u dooont
then imma have to shoot
shoot shoot shoot just like a fuckin troop
now ya see blood
like soo woo

first off, hated this fucking beat.

the autotune was random and i didnt like it lol it sounded decent on the rhymes tho.

i know the lyrics and the double meaning and the lyrics are fucking fire. rhyming is dope, flow is also sick.

overall i like it, but i wont listen much cause of the beat.

EDIT-and i recommed you feed other people if you expect to get any responses other than mine lmfao

like ASP sed i leave feedback on who ever i want ..as does everyone on this forum

[DelinQuent]

if you dont leave feedback for others... who's gonna wanna leave feedback for you?

[Call Me Pik]

i do leave feed for others check my most recent posts bro...n im not forcing ne one to leave me feedback merely requesting it

[B.A.D.]

LMAO @ the beat hahahaha

the lyrics are strange but the wordplay is excelent

are you dissing or supporting obama?? lol hahah

anyways, great keystyle, good feel, good autotune

but not my type of track (political)... but good job overall

[KDEWolf]

This is fuckin sick im not gonna lie. Love the beat... Thats dope for real

Im guessing the auto tune is to make fun of Weezy. Im guessing its not serious lol

The lyrics are tight

[Tash8]

haha did you purposely try to make fun of Amili beat/song?

[Xray]

one shit ass song. beat is fucking disgusting. that obama obama shit is annoying to the extreme. im not gonna say anything positive about this song cause its wack. and yo that pic you got up on myspace is gay man, really gay.

[Boston]

lol i read the comments before i heard this but its very clear people are exaggerating.
not even trying to sound fucked up but if you want feedback ill give mine
its not bad but at the same time its not NASTY LYRICS, FLOW IS FUCKING SICK, WOW THE WORDPLAY DONT GET ME STARTED

to me the lyrics are average, flow is on point for the most, fell off at points and the wordplay is beginners wordplay. i dont really like this track, but i know you have talent if that makes you feel better lol

i dont care for the beat lol

keep it up though man
not tryna bash you or anything just my honest feedback

[Call Me Pik]

whuts up ax thnks for ya feed man...kde glad u where feelin it ...n tash yeah it was suppose to be a parody kind of thing i usually laugh when i listen to it haha ....n i appreciate for ur honesty boston ...i know its not my best just thru it together after i heard the beat kuz i wanted to do a lil somthing for the election n didnt wanna preach to sway votes lol