Life

[Nizar]

yeh datz what i'm talkin' about
i'm sick of this life that goes around
so many times I was pushed around
no one's there, no one cares
so many times My friends let me down
no one's there, no one would ever stare
have you ever slept away
have your faith ever slipped away
and your friends went away
no one cares and no one was afraid
have you ever wished you were strong
have you ever tried to sing the song
the song of life
it's so messed up but we're alive
thank God, we will survive
to talk about life,
when it gets down and high
stay Satisfied, Make the Deal, It's not a Lie

[Solace]

Short, got to the point, flow was meh, lyrics werent that great, needed multies. Keep at it

[Slim Zaddy]

well i actually agree with shadymademe , but you're new here , so it's acceptable . anyway gd luck

[Arabian Shady]

when i read your opening lines i knew this was below average,you HAVE to start strong man
read how the TR greats write,learn their ways, if you dont know wat a multi is ask, ask wat is a metaphore ..how do u use it...
but this was avj on a whole
Peace

[Nizar]

well, i've got something like "The Rapper's Handbook" and i'm getting help from it cuz it has everything.
thank you guys, I know i'm still weak but i promise to do my best.

peace.....4 all Gz

[Rain Matrix]

well this is no rappers handbook but anyway

MULTI- I'm On-My-Own tha Strong-Guy-Knows to Battle-Me, not really he'll be a Casualty

METAPHOR- whatchu mean I'm No Artist I'm So Heartless I rip up mc's like an Old Carpet!

[Arabian Shady]

^ exactly
never heard of any rappers handbook. probably wont do good either
the closest thing you have to that is 4d's version of definations in the rap battle section, heck it out, it helps grasp basic concepts
Peace