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Need I Repeat?

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Need I Repeat?

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 10th, '08, 21:53

do i need to repeat myself again
well let me proceed, i'll help u in
tell everybody i'm bout to compete until i am bounded beneath

now i will challenge them each with the sound that i speak
while encounterin the fowl and the weak
cuz i found within, my talent's not cheap

no ground you can win cuz my balance i keep
my power's wisdom, that outlet is key for an author so deep

to alter my sense, you cowards may sneak doubts while i sleep
but i've always been surrounded, allow me to breathe
or drownin you'll end, somehow underneath
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Need I Repeat?

Postby MC Anonymous » Nov 10th, '08, 21:59

This is good! i enjoyed this. Simplicity sometimes is complexity.....which describes this perfectly. :y:
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Re: Need I Repeat?

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 10th, '08, 22:03

thanx, great comment :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Need I Repeat?

Postby mcZu » Nov 10th, '08, 22:18

Great, ....need I repeat?
keep it up bro :b:
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Re: Need I Repeat?

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 10th, '08, 22:22

thanx! :b: CHEERS!
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Need I Repeat?

Postby Steve Spag » Nov 10th, '08, 22:57

Good shit bro, glad to see you're still writting them dope drops. Nothing too complex, but like the first dude said, sometimes not having compexity just suits it better, which it did for this peice.

Keep it up man!
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Re: Need I Repeat?

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 12th, '08, 04:15

thanx for checking this piece out and reviewing this guys
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