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Postby JMG » Nov 12th, '08, 05:35

you ever been so isolated and got so high u fainted
but ur eyes still open dilated,feeling like ur mind's sedated
while all ur time is wasted then all the sudden you lie awakened
feelin violated like u just got off a ride with satan
u go outside an face it then notice the sky is vacant
you feel fryed, abated so many eyes is gazing
u wanna go inside but u can't find the way in
the sky remain's grim then comes sudden raining
everything looks like a painting with the colors fading
u lose a bunch of patience and think ur suffocating
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Re: Woaoaah...theese druugs I do..

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 12th, '08, 05:39

yeah that sucks...stop rapping
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Re: Woaoaah...theese druugs I do..

Postby Emadyville » Nov 12th, '08, 05:39

Straight fire :y: Rhymes were impressive :y:
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Postby gladimnotsoluble » Nov 12th, '08, 06:02

tight flow, i felt it. :y:
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Re: Woaoaah...theese druugs I do..

Postby Ka0t1c » Nov 12th, '08, 06:25

awesome :y:
oh yeah... and thanks for nothing too
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Re: Woaoaah...theese druugs I do..

Postby JMG » Nov 13th, '08, 00:42

thanks I appreciate all the feed.
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Postby Solace » Nov 13th, '08, 02:15

sick man!

Theseeee druggsss....awesome d12 song :)
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Postby Xray » Nov 13th, '08, 05:24

Good shit, I'm digging this piece. :y:
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Re: Woaoaah...theese druugs I do..

Postby Slim Zaddy » Nov 13th, '08, 06:53

that's hot man .. :y:
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Postby Arabian Shady » Nov 13th, '08, 19:56

flow was fiery bro,wiked use of vocab and crazy structure
sick :y:
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Postby stevethetruth » Nov 26th, '08, 19:49

not bad.. nice job :y:
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Postby Steve Spag » Nov 28th, '08, 16:33

Haha that was dope, dude. I really enjoyed it, and I loved the flow for it. Reminded me of some old school Eminem shit.

Nice drop man, keep it up!
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Re: Woaoaah...theese druugs I do..

Postby Ice_Scarred » Nov 28th, '08, 19:08

"you ever been so isolated and got so high u fainted
but ur eyes still open dilated,feeling like ur mind's sedated"

Dope from the first line, bro. As Spag said, it reminds me of some Old skool Slim. Rhyme scheme was tight, Your words painted a picture in my head, and it definitely had a devasting flow. Keep it up dude!
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Re: Woaoaah...theese druugs I do..

Postby Ice_Scarred » Nov 28th, '08, 19:08

"you ever been so isolated and got so high u fainted
but ur eyes still open dilated,feeling like ur mind's sedated"

Dope from the first line, bro. As Spag said, it reminds me of some Old skool Slim. Rhyme scheme was tight, Your words painted a picture in my head, and it definitely had a devasting flow. Keep it up dude!
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