by Boston » Nov 17th, '08, 03:59
heres the feed i promised
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i like the chorus and how it shows other artist rapping and shit, but when the first verse drops, i dont like how it has a motorhead poster in the background, it is a rap video. its also focused on him for a little to long (so you can tell its a amateur video). it is much cooler seeing people in the studio doing there thing. i mean its something people can relate to, its a good feeling. word. now you have someone performing on this tv around the 1:45 mark, im loving that affect, but i think its not focused enough on that, because of the rest of the background (maybe if you made it lighter, or something, put more focus on tv) around the 2:28 mark when the tv is to the side and the other dude starts rapping thats some sick effects. the video keeps stopping at the 2:56 mark and thats that. i do think everyone on the song should somehow pitch in videos of them self in the studio and doing something to act out their lyrics besides being in there house somehow. you know what im saying. otherwise its a good start. i hope this feed helps. keep it up