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Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 13th, '08, 17:39

First of all, major props to Sajjad for helping me out with the mixing when I couldn't get my shit together!
Second, Narkimic isn't a member of TR. He's a sick ass rapper from the same town as me, but he moved away. We talked about how cool it would be if we two did a track together.
We wanted to make a track with a raw underground feel to it.
This song is probably the one I feel the happiest about. My best track I've done so far.

So give me some feedback, it's appreciated

Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be.mp3 - 9.01MB
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Nov 13th, '08, 17:45

9mb oh shit :whistle: downloadin :flower:
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 13th, '08, 17:48

Big Proof 4ever wrote:9mb oh shit :whistle: downloadin :flower:


yeah, I know it's pretty big, but oh well... :8)
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Big Proof 4ever » Nov 13th, '08, 18:14

damn song is amazing man,everything is on top flow delivery lyrics,i dont see any negative things,rly one of sickest songz on tr man,great job :worship: :worship: :worship: listens again :smoking: and again :whistle:
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 13th, '08, 18:22

Big Proof 4ever wrote:damn song is amazing man,everything is on top flow delivery lyrics,i dont see any negative things,rly one of sickest songz on tr man,great job :worship: :worship: :worship: listens again :smoking: and again :whistle:


Wow! Feels so good that you actually think so when there's a lot of awesome songs on TR!
Greatly appreciate it man! :worship:
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Xray » Nov 13th, '08, 22:15

Fuck yeah, now that's underground all about. Raw and real shit man, you already know I loved this track. Definitely the best track on TR at the moment.
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 13th, '08, 22:42

Xray wrote:Fuck yeah, now that's underground all about. Raw and real shit man, you already know I loved this track. Definitely the best track on TR at the moment.


Thanks bro! And once again, thanks a million for helping me out with the mixing! :worship:
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Call Me Pik » Nov 14th, '08, 00:23

listening as i go ..........first verse persons verse is very present and sounds perfect with the dark beat lyrics are hott def feelin it ................uhhhhhh...i dont like the transition sounds really distorted and idk if that was the hook but eh wasnt that great ........the 2nd verse a lil worse then the first one but is still good i like it .....yeah thats def the hook i dont like it lol .......3rd verse presence is there and the rhyming is real good..good person to have on the 3rd verse "rappin wit my pale skin" haha ...i think i like the 3rd verse the best 1st verse 2nd best and 2nd verse 3rd best figya it out haha nice track 8/10
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby DelinQuent » Nov 14th, '08, 01:18

not a fan of these types of tracks.

you did great of the first verse. flow, delivery, rhyming, everything was on point.

hook is eh, not good.

2nd verse wasnt as good as the first liked the play on 6 tho.

3rd verse was pretty good, the flow on the pale skin line was dope. some of the lines were corny but oh well, didnt ruin it, but didnt help it. (the bird's eye line)

overall 7/10 due to a weak chorus.

keep on it :y:

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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby <Stiiccy> » Nov 14th, '08, 01:25

yoooooooo siick siick shit man...damn son...

weak chorus tho...

beat is a lil played...2 deep has to step...

but great song great lyrics...perfect delivery,,,

8/10
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 14th, '08, 12:01

Thanks for all the feedback people, helps me get a lot better! :y:
Really really appreciated! :8)
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby B.A.D. » Nov 14th, '08, 22:05

can't feed atm, I gotta go

but anyways I have a question

some time ago another guy from sweeden too posted a track in here featuring Narmic...

are they the same guys?? (cuz I loved the other track) it was called "Phunk Orchestra"
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Tornado » Nov 14th, '08, 23:06

damm i only heard the 1st verse (internet troubles lol) but your verse was just great, noting to fault there..imaa check it tommorow fully
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 15th, '08, 00:47

Big Ax-D wrote:can't feed atm, I gotta go

but anyways I have a question

some time ago another guy from sweeden too posted a track in here featuring Narmic...

are they the same guys?? (cuz I loved the other track) it was called "Phunk Orchestra"


That was probably Phunk2 and Narkimic on that track.
And I didn't know Phunk2 was a member of this site lol.
But that's the same Narkimic anyways. :8)
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Re: Jay-19 f. Narkimic - Here To Be

Postby Jay-19 » Nov 16th, '08, 21:12

I feel I need to bump this.
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